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complex 16-pt. 1
artist: Dolla Bill
track: complex 16-Part 1 album: n/a verse 1: i hit quick wit lines dat have you bent from killa shit... da complexity of my ryhme style is one of tha complexest... im rippin holes through trances of demonstrations as hoes waitin... for my skeet after i taught they "thoughts" some patience... im one of tha greatest emcees spittin from tha D... i puts it all on my grave, tellin tha truth indeed, bold like "sheed"... and lookin closely will eliminate tha thought of me hatin on OM's... like "Em's to Kims", nigga please... but do expect me to never back down from a challenge... cuz i'll always manage to cause extensive damage... my number one enemy seems to be me... takin straight up assaissian shots at posers for free, RIP double B :laugh: ... and dats just tha way i is... gun tight on my hip, switchblade on my wrist... guess im ready to die like my my alias was Biggie Smalls... times up for your "dragged" out verses like yo name was Ru Paul... but rappin is my inuindo, case closed its simple, glock aimed at yo temple... i'll pop yo bitch ass like a pimple, back like forgotten kin-folk, suck my muthafuckin pickle, BITCH (LMFAO)... :shocked: *give me some feedback plz...im ready for anything |
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can a nigga get some feedz on dis?
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uuuupppppppppiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnn dis shit 4real
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no offence but I dont think "complexest" is a word LoL. Try to work your structure out, and than your piece will flow better, it was an ok drop though, keep writing and keep leaving feed.
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^^^LOL...complexest is not a word and this shit is dope cuz...i give you a 8/10 4real...get back at me kid...
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LMMFAO :laugh: ...damn, i guess "complexest" aint a word...foreget i said it...read over it or somethin...now can i get some more feedback?
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Complexes? LOL Damn Mayne Plz Neva eva Make Up Wordz LOL Bcuz That Shit Was Ova The Hills LOL
But The Stuff was Hot You worked alot Wit Multi'z and Jus Like the rest I Think You did Good But The Only Thing That Messed You up was ........Complexest..............LOL OMG I Aint Neva Heard Some Shit Like Dat LOL N E ways RTF in My Sig and Oh Yeah Keep Up The Good Work RTF plz |
LOL...thanx...see how everybody dat see dis laughs and is happy...its so nice of yall...*clears eyes*...LMAO
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pretty goood dogg 6.8/10 ur welcome for the feed voee on 1 da battles
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thanx 4real...i got you on tha battles...get at me on "complex 16's-part 2"...its straight fiya!
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^^^yeah, everybody dat read dis...read tha remix...(in tha sig)...we killin it in OM...
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dis was pretty good nice vocab flow was on point nice 8.5/10
cheerios take the battle between me n you out cause i just merked you good battle doe |
lol..aight..first bout this complexest..lol..prolly aint a word..but we know wot ya meant..new one for the dictionary maybe.....as for ya piece..this was decent...nice topic...ur rhymin was good..only thing was ur structure...some may have a problem with tht...but u will get better with tht..its just the writin tht im interested in...and i liked this...good work..keep it up..wun...
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LOOK THIS WAS NICE GOOD VOCAB REALLY ENJOYED IT PLEASE PEEP MY POST NEED FEEDBACK
talk cash clout lame as ideas dash out// my brains drink fine wine and become Einstein// put atomics leerie in my Ebonic theory// flow corrupt and blow up// like Hiroshima, in rap erase plots on the market and place shots in targets// like soldiers on the rifle range, this trifle is strange so on the cypher reaarange brains// |
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