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MC4Eyez 07-17-02 07:51 AM

Tender Affection
 
Remember...this is a joke...

I love y ou so much, but my feelings were rejected
My heart was torn to shreds, my sould was unprotected
So late last night I took a risk, and prayed for good to reap
I climbed the tree beside your window, and I watched you in your sleep
Now please, don't be afraid, I'm not some kind of crazy raper
What's a restraining order but a little piece of paper?
And even after that, it's true that I was not disheartened
So last night I looked for keepsakes from you, hidden in your garbage
I love you more than words can tell, my heart's full like a cup
That's why I called you thirty times last night and just hung up
We two appear so happy as your gaze my eyes does meet
In the pictures that I doctored on Adobe Photosuite
When I saw you for the first time, a bell in my heart rung
Each time I taste your pepper spray, it's nectar to my tongue
And every time I see you, dear, my breast swells up with hope
Asleep I see you in my dreams; awake through telescope
When I begged your love, you spit on me; saliva moist and cold
But perhaps in time I'll clone you from the enzymes that it holds

Hope you enjoyed it.
Peace

DirtBoy69 07-17-02 08:46 AM

swollen members ? in your sig that's canadain ain't no one in the states listen to are shit i thought ? ah well anyway it's a pretty dope peice nice use of voclab just enough to keep the flow straight i like it keep that shit up

MC4Eyez 07-17-02 10:57 PM

Thanks a lot for the reply. I don't listen to them all the time, but the track it's from is called "Full Contact" and it features Chali 2na and Evidence. It's worth a listen.

Peace

MC4Eyez 07-18-02 02:12 PM

Up!

Peace

((NiCe)) 07-18-02 02:59 PM

as usual u prove that ur terrible

Johnny 6-feet 07-18-02 03:54 PM

terrible? that was bloody brilliant fella! i loved the concept, the images you told had me laughing out loud (no shitting), this was original and well-executed.

i'll be looking out for more of your material.
keep posting.

MC4Eyez 07-18-02 07:18 PM

Thanks a lot for the feedback. Little Nice, either battle me, or leave your hate out of my threads. Thanks.

Peace

((NiCe)) 07-18-02 08:31 PM

LOL HAHAHAHAHAHA LOL FUCK U I AINT BATTLIN OR STOPPIN THE HATE ....bitch

1ne flow 07-18-02 11:31 PM

yo, this painted a picture as a some type of restless stalker that won't give up-some funny shit though about the pepper spray and spit and enzymes and all that, straight comedy.
keep doin ya thing son- go reply to my open mic
i'd appreciate it

slum flow

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=17122

1ne

MC4Eyez 07-19-02 02:17 PM

Thanks for the reply. And Little Nice, thanks for the up.

Peace

MC4Eyez 07-20-02 02:29 PM

Up!

...OrigiNATE... 07-20-02 02:34 PM

Nice Subject And Im Glad To see you didnt fumble w/ wack lyriks....Holla Poetic Scriptures..

MC4Eyez 07-21-02 10:31 AM

I try not to "fumble with wack lyrics." Thanks for the reply.

Peace


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