Sovereign vs bluthug916
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 01-13-05 at 06:55 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

bluthug916 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-05 06:26 PM.

Sovereign has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-05 06:26 PM.

man u crazy
bust'n them flow
try'n to battle me
well hea i go

com on if u think u can
out flow me
using ur band
well just c
whos betta or whos not
cuzz u gonna lose to me
wither i win or not
i'll always come back to c
if u can out beat me

uppin this........................................

This was feedback posted for bluthug916
 

You R Not In Poetry Class U Ckrab!!!

U R Sorry!!! Dont Like What I Put, Set It Up

uppin.............................................

Voted For: Sovereign

wow both verses very weak.....but stribe please dont DQ this...just look at the other guys verse.........Nuff aid


every thing is 1000% better than the other guy

Voted For: Sovereign

man u crazy
bust'n them flow
try'n to battle me
well hea i go

^^^filler.....not too nice of a set up...sorry.

com on if u think u can
out flow me
using ur band
well just c

^^^no.....im sorry.

whos betta or whos not
cuzz u gonna lose to me
wither i win or not
i'll always come back to c
if u can out beat me

^^^nothing here either.

blu...
work on punches, multies, metaphors, vocab, flow and structure. try practicing in open mic before you jump into the text battling bruh.


get off my nutz.......................you fuckin wack rhyme whorder
his ass is realy on fire but its because hes the bench warmer

^^^not really feelin' it, but it had potential. lol....you spelled word-er wrong.

Watch me draw lines round this bastard, slip n' snap necks
This kid Needs to Buy World War Recounts to receive Veteran Text.

^^^okay...but not too hard.

Sick of this Math Geek With no Skills to be had,chance to be grabbed
i may as well Rape You With Knifes the way this Asshole Gets Stabbed//

^^^eh. nothing sensational but acceptable.

sov...
you at least had some punches and multies in your verse...but you need some work as well. try to focus on wording your lines/punches better...it'll help out. also, try to up the vocab a little, r.v. likes that. your structure was on point....nice.

keep doing your thing fellas........good luck on r.v. one.


...the super........c.s.

uppin 4 votes.....................................

Voted For: Sovereign

EAZY EAZY EAZY THING TO VOTE ON....I mean Buttplug didn't even drop really......Sov got this one.....came harder in all aspects....

uppin.............................................

uppin 4 votes..........................................

Voted For: Sovereign

mmmmmmmmmmmmmm have to go with sov on this one.

you're words where not hitting me any homes but thats not a hate vote just keep working on it. Sov u get this becuase I could understand you more in this battle and you had better vocab multis worplay harder hits and you took the opener-closure section also so overll you get this vote peace and return the fav.