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2 Of Da Most Slept On!!!
yo...there are no "made up words in this"...i think
artist: Dolla Bill ft. RIOT track: complex 16's-part 2 album: n/a verse 1: Dolla Bill i spit at emees more than cowboys like clint eastwood... son of a bitch made fool step up, i wish you would... i take care of bullies who bully cats for not havin stacks... guess im tha robin hood of tha hood wit dope lyrics in packs... how many times must my ryhme pattern be forced from my fingertips... my style is like my condoms, it dont snap and it never slips... im socially makin decisions dat will soon have me winnin... da old beef was foregivin and now im reinvented my vision... im tryin to put multis wit multis like indeph *get @ me nigga!*... and im tryin to build my own crew, DPB till death... and Dem PlayBoiz is up and comin, big props to my dawgs... we breakin down walls to have a bigger place for our halls... hatas pick up yall jaws, bitches hand in yall drawls... its time for another trip in tha mind of "Dolla tha Lord"... im knockin dirt off my shoulders 4real, FUCK yesterday... and fuck tommarrow cuz it aint promised, da kid is here to stay... hook: Dolla Bill im standin my gronds for a change, spittin straight from tha brains... pop cock to these dames, half of yall niggaz know my name... but if you dont allow me to tell yall, read my grill... im da kid from tha D known as Dolla Bill *yeah*... ..::repeat 2x::.. bridge: Dolla Bill i choose words one by one, reputation is none... but soon enough yall gone know who i be... and i aint tha only one, it runs through tha DPB... i gots my older cuzin by tha name of R-I-O-T... verse 2: Riot im comin in on tha back burner, tha learner of vertue is here... consistanly breakin these necks, then i persuvere... i've snatched tha batton from my cuz and now im runnin... dumpin shit piles of emcees i've chewed up and now im gunnin... cuz words now a days are just antynoms of sticks and stones... they have never broken bones, but shells hit home... reppin tha DPB strickly like wino's and tha word tipsy... i've stummbled a bit, but now im floatin like frisbies... im evied by everyone, tha president is on tha line... i told him to kiss my ass cuz i was writtin lines... tha world is mine like nas on illmatic... im rippin verse after verse like slim shady on dogmatic... ..::hook 2x::.. yo...we want feedz on dis one 4real...cmon yall...lets go |
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uuuuuppppiiiiiiinnnnnn dis shit fam 4real
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OH SHIT!!!....dis came out nice...uppin dis yall...cmon
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CAN WE GET SOME FUCKIN FEEDBACK ON DIS?...COT-DAMN!
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YEAH THIS WAS ALL RIGHT PLEASE PEEP MY VERSE NEED FEEDBACK
slow down my car and flow nouns bazaar// like grammar teachers and hammer creatures// on microphones, my pride lame as I divide brains// into seperate parts with this desparate art// like a proper doctor during surgery, don't worry about this flurry of rhymes dun,I'll stitch a bitch use needlework on a feeble jerk// |
do Not Freepost In Others Open Mics. If Your Not Gonna Leave Feed Dont Type Anything. Create Your Own Thread For Whole Songs You Have Written. Not For A Few Lines
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^^^dats mos def true...4real...now can i get real feedback plz
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lookin for feedback please.....
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i aint got real feedz yet...damn
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WTF yall doin???...read and leave feed!!!
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im bringin dis back from tha dead...its iight to me...but can i get feedback on dis shit?
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it's aight coulda been better in ways
Dolla-Bill: you had some good punchlines and concepts to ur verse but there really wasn't anything complex about it add some more multi's and it'll be way more better but i'll give your verse a 6.5/10 Riot: your verse had some good multi's and ok punches both of you went together smoothly and had a real good clean concept to the open mic i'd give u a 7/10 combined i'd give this a 8/10 |
^^^thanx...dis shit is old as hell though...tha first one i did had big words in it...lmao...then on dis one i felt like it was a remix...so thats why i named it part 2...but its old...i might make a part 3...jus might...*makes evil laugh*
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lol yeah will if u make a part 3 i'd be glad to be in it just ta let u know incase u take that thought seriously
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