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King~Dipset vs Wicked Clown
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If Check Ins Are In Then You Will Be Given A topic To Write About... Poems Then Must Be In By Sunday And Voting Will Be Over On Tuesday... Topic:evaporated by glory |
checkin in!! give me a HOT topic dawg and goodluck KD
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Im justa checkin In .....................And good luck to you to mayne
And Please like he said A Hot Topic ! |
Evaporated by Glory My Life is Nothing But a man made story Because my life is evaporated by Man made glory My depression Is Depressed because I Am Stressed over Stress And my Obsession Id Obsessed for the rest which means that I am Next To be called into the sky like evaporated rain i wish the hurt would go away like I was evaporating pain But its all just in my brain as I write this down you see all the Hury Guilt & shame, Look How thet put me down Ive been to state to state from city to city and all I all I seen was Rebates by dates and Blocks to Busy My fate is To die By Im Destined to Live I Got a place to die, but i lesson i'll give dont get caught up by the ways of this world everyday Death comes to some innocent boy or girl That why im Here to Induct some Knowledge And im here to construct this topic into Logic "For god so Love the world That he gave his only begooten son" To die on the cross and get Beaten Like a slum Well he will be back & you would know if you read the story How The sinner burned in eternal Hell because of his evaporated Glory |
The End On top of the world, i can see it all from my godly stoop the world peering up at me through millions of ghostly eyes I represent all the heros of the world, past and presant I am fame and glory a new and i am time wasted people see me and burst out with pride others look apon me with disgust and spit at my name everyone who ever had a dream knows me as a tiresome and lustful foe... people kill for me people will starve in my name, but yet no matter the pain and anguish people will never truly learn. no one will ever know the secret to true happiness lies beyond me it lies within your hearts, i am but a charleton, a sham he who has achived me never really had me lives lost, familys torn apart limb by stinking limb! and over what! no one can tell you, no one will ever realize my pain! i have caused indescribable agony and yet people come back for more!!! when will all these people learn, Fame dies... in the end only a chosen few will remember your name.... you are only someone to others if you are someone to yourself... i am glory, some see me and some dont for those that do... i am gone in a flash in a single blink of an eye..... i die |
.... another non rhyming poem... if u dont understand... dont vote
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ok pretty close here vocab tied imagery is also tied here creativity is also dope by both which leaves one thing emotion wicked i feel you didnt come as good as king here he had a more heartfelt piece i could feel his words more in his drop so he got my vote.both of you please return honest votes in my battle also.
vote-king dip set |
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