topical ( witnessing a drive by)
 

I saw it all with my own two eyes,
I saw the bullets punch as they slied.
People ducking and covering for their lives.
But all I do is watch in fear as they all die,
Smoke and blood is heard in the night.
But all I know is that this is nothing but a fight,
Not between me or society,
but between me and those who I hate,
So as I grasp my mm's and get ready to hook my bate.
I can not take anything more then a simple defeat,
so if ur gonna fuck in da hood,
u best be prepared to be takin from where you stood. :shoot:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171966



http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170569



http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1894519

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1894827

LOOK I ENJOYED THIS PIECE PLEASE GIVE ME SOME FEEDBACK

I try rule the hot block but some fool shot a glock// now got to duck my head or get struck by lead// but I dived fly just to survive a drive by// note I now tote a snub nose just to stay above those// that shoot rounds and pollute grounds// with shell casings

I try rule the hot block but some fool shot a glock// now got to duck my head or get struck by lead//

I liked urs a lil that was the top two I enjoyed the others I think you could work on homes.

ok feedback only please. peace ;)

definately can use some elevation.....this was an ok piece.....6/10 you can use elevation tho.....you'll g et better....i used to really suck so don't feel bad lol....check my first post on this site....it was wack lmao but keep elevatin
peace