Black Queen vs MaRVJay1009
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 Ko'ed

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-15-05 at 04:12 PM

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10 lines..mah aint no need 4 dat unlimited shit....

Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-05 04:18 PM.

He lacks new flows , so Imma clown on jay’s rhymin’ disadvantage
cause he’s known to re-use ‘more lines’ than coke recyclin’ addicts
This herb is useless..he isnt postin first he wants the worst abusements
Ya not original..the way ya been feedin off writtens like nervous students
Like atheists there’s no faith for ya.. prayers wont save you from this loss
Cuz you gotta ram ya fists through God to get ya punches 'a-cross'
U always admired me, ever since u came here u wack hoe
But since u dont go out, i never worried bout u always in my shadows
Sad...u da only one who can never have played name flips
& u knew u were gon’ be served, shit a plate is what you came with

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-05 05:12 AM.

look.....

ima exspose ya wait dis hoe's a fake just check da bar's!....
2 get "rid of black queen" i aint gota "throw away a deck of cards"
dis chick lyin rv she neva b...handlin drugs..start panacin cuzz
u scary hoe dat get "shook" more than a "celebirty hand in da club"
she 15 n luv da suck dick ya'll dis childs a freak.....
believe i'll damage ya u like a "d-block calender" ya "style(s) is week"
yung boys be gas her like black cum a make ya hair grow properly.
look at "sig" she said 1nce i start suckin dick "deres no stopin me"
u oughta write flows..cuzz mj yeah i slaughter trife hoe's!....
nice? u even saught a..in rap u'll "neva c me" im saught of like "strobe"


4th bar look in her sig..it says there's no stopin me

nuff said

Voted For: Black Queen

i love you both:)this was a dope battle for real its down to line for line so here goes
MARV
ima exspose ya wait dis hoe's a fake just check da bar's!....
2 get "rid of black queen" i aint gota "throw away a deck of cards"
LIL STRECHED FLOW WORKED THOUGH DOPE NAME PLAY AND PUNCH HERE A 9/10
dis chick lyin rv she neva b...handlin drugs..start panacin cuzz
u scary hoe dat get "shook" more than a "celebirty hand in da club"
OK GOOD PUNCH AGAIN BUT MADDDDD STRECHED HERE 5/10
she 15 n luv da suck dick ya'll dis childs a freak.....
believe i'll damage ya u like a "d-block calender" ya "style(s) is week"
LOL GOOD META WORDPLAY REAL ORIGINAL 6/10
yung boys be gas her like black cum a make ya hair grow properly.
look at "sig" she said 1nce i start suckin dick "deres no stopin me"
LMFAO IT DONT SAY THAT LOL STILL FUNNY PERSONAL 7/10
u oughta write flows..cuzz mj yeah i slaughter trife hoe's!....
nice? u even saught a..in rap u'll "neva c me" im saught of like "strobe
I SEE STROBE ALOT:)BUT ANYWAYS GOOD META KINDA OF PLAYED THATS BEEN SAID BEFORE JUST NOT EXACTLY THE SAME A 5/10
32/50
GOOD VERSE THE LAST BAR BEING PLAYED AND YOUR LINES ARE STRECHED HURT YOU A LITTLE BUT DOPE PUNCHES AND DISSES HERE AND NICE FLOW EXCEPT THAT HAND SHAKE LINE

BLACK QUEEN
He lacks new flows , so Imma clown on jay’s rhymin’ disadvantage
cause he’s known to re-use ‘more lines’ than coke recyclin’ addicts
OK DOPE PUNCH HERE ITS BEEN USED THE CONCEPT BEFORE BUT IT WAS WORDED NICELY HERE AND HIT PRETTY GOOD 8/10
This herb is useless..he isnt postin first he wants the worst abusements
Ya not original..the way ya been feedin off writtens like nervous students
HAHAHA DOPE PUNCH HERE ALSO NICE NICE 9/10
Like atheists there’s no faith for ya.. prayers wont save you from this loss
Cuz you gotta ram ya fists through God to get ya punches 'a-cross'
DAMN ANOTER HARD ASS DOPE PUNCH HERE ALSO NICE NICE 8/10
U always admired me, ever since u came here u wack hoe
But since u dont go out, i never worried bout u always in my shadows
OK NOT DOPE DECENT PUNCH A LIL STRECHED 5/10
Sad...u da only one who can never have played name flips
& u knew u were gon’ be served, shit a plate is what you came with
OK ENDER HERE NOT GREAT BUT OK 5/10
35/50

OK BLack QUEEN GETS MY VOTE EVEN THOUGH YALL TIED IN PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND VOCAB WAS EVEN QUEEN HAD A BETTER STRUTURE AND FLOW MARV YOU HAD WAY TOO MANY STRECHED LINES HERE AND THAT HURTYOUR SCORE BLACK QUEEN CAME MAD HARD TO START WHILE MARV WAS GOOD ALL THROUGHOUT BUT THIS WAS CLOSE AND CAME DOWN TO EVERYTHING AND QUEEN LED I THE OTHER AREAS AND THAT GOT HER MY VOTE MARV WORK ON NOT STRECHING YOUR LINES SO MUCH EVERYTHING ELSE IS PERFECT GOOD BATTLE TO YOU BOTH

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. D-Iced = Cali. Marvjay1009 had blacklisted Cali from voting in his battles. Vote removed

Voted For: Black Queen



Voted For: black queen

I see vote for black queen cuz she had a way better structure and not only that I think she came harder wit da punches
marv u had some good lines in their but I just couldn't flow wit it
so I vote: black queen

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uppin fo votes.....................................

Voted For: Black Queen

damm gurl u get this vote no doubt she came harder had more personels in this battle her vocab was ok her multis she can work on a little but she had more then waht the other home boy had and her opener-her closure was better and most of all she was easier to understand so over all queen gets this.


He lacks new flows , so Imma clown on jay’s rhymin’ disadvantage
cause he’s known to re-use ‘more lines’ than coke recyclin’ addicts
This herb is useless..he isnt postin first he wants the worst abusements
Ya not original..the way ya been feedin off writtens like nervous students
Like atheists there’s no faith for ya.. prayers wont save you from this loss
Cuz you gotta ram ya fists through God to get ya punches 'a-cross'
U always admired me, ever since u came here u wack hoe
9/10

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

y'all people don't like a real verse man this was ill as shit marvjay took this 1 by far people his punches and personals do u notice he got personals like crazy he killed this black queen girl i think marvjay got this because of punches and personals black queen u need to elavate 6-0 don't mean u the greatest but u might be good i kno for a fact marvjay beat this gurl so marvjay gettin this 1 black ueen ur punches and personals are still playful i think u need to elavate on them two things other than that u straight 1

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^^^bitch it mean sumin ill merk u n a battle but uppin

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Thiss Battle Wass Good As Hell Marv Took Thiss Seriously..
Openor=Marv,Yo Shit Wass Hott Nice Punch
Strukture=Tie,Both Shit Wass Easy Ta Read
Punches=Marv,His Shit Wass Hittin Harder
Vokab=Bq,Good Vokab
Personals=Marv,Yo That And Ya Punches Took This
Closer=Good Ass Shit Both You But Marvs Shit Wass Better

Yo Marv Took Thiss Cus His Personals And Punches I Love That Shit His Wass Hittin Mad Hard And Thass All He Koed Her With Tha Punches And Personals.....................

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Voted For: Black Queen

wow wow and wow. great battle.
punches- lol.....tie as fuck...Black Queen had some tite punches but Marv countered dem shits
personals- Marv had dose, his mindset was to work on personals and i think BQ should work on dat
structure- BQ juss escaped wit dat one because if u noticed all her lines were like da same characters, so that was a plus (+).
multis- none of yall..... work on dat
closing- i think the closing went to BQ. her closing was RAW as FUCK, but Marv's closing was kinda whack
v/ BQ