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Pleim 01-14-05 06:24 PM

Pleim vs Killah.Bwoy
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Letz see how "dope" you really our :laugh:

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 01-14-05 at 07:09 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

System 01-14-05 06:42 PM

Killah.Bwoy has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-05 06:42 PM.

System 01-14-05 06:44 PM

Pleim has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-05 06:44 PM.

Pleim 01-14-05 06:56 PM

Listen ya fake azz vet, i show no remorse at all
See imma rob KB..............with NO toys involved
You been here forever and still no respect? shit
Say you the "underdog"....but thats just a bitch
Look son, all of your punches are at such a void
I'd think a fag like you could at least spell "boy"
You suck homeboy,what else you need to learn?
Whatchu gunna do Wendy's voters see you served?
It's over, and it's done, what else do I gotta say?
You're just a nerd who averages 55 posts a day!

:laugh2:

K.ontroverz.Y 01-14-05 07:04 PM

Aiight, Listen..

Fuck You, Dawg, Cummin At Me..Better Luck Bustin a Nut..
I Swear On My Life, I'll take Your ass Cheeks, and Glue Them Shut..
That Eliminates my Job, Now I Don't Have to "Shit On You"..
Crush Your House, What You Gon Tell The Judge, I cut Your trashbin in two?
Face It Kid, Your Hands The Closest thing your gettin to pussy..
How Can Killah Fall off, When I Got mini Mouse tryna push-me..
Pop! Pop! Naww That Aint The Gun, Thats your Mom Thirsty Again..
Kid can't seem to miss the target, Shame, he alwayz aims for the rear end..
I Release Shaq Attacks, Fuck L.A, Like Your Team, You Fell Off..
And I Aint talkin bout church when I sound The Bells Off..

CounTREE Jay 01-14-05 07:47 PM

Voted For: Killah.Bwoy

Yo, you doiminated every single category. Other dude came with some bullshit. I don't even think i need to say anything more. He attempted wordplay, and failed miserably. Killah, you came hella whack to, but you obviously wrote to the level of your competition. It was mostly self-glorification, but at least you had something resembling punches. Overall, just a below-par battle by both.

Vote: KB

-CJ-

Sik Wit It 01-14-05 07:50 PM

This was feedback posted for Killah.Bwoy
 
Just checking pollz

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Nice battle here though

K.ontroverz.Y 01-14-05 11:52 PM

yes indeed. killah. doesnt try unless needed to.....

M-Eazy 01-15-05 09:27 PM

Voted For: Pleim

This was a real close battle. I dont know who took this one right now.
Killa-u had nice flow, but i wasnt feelin ur structure. you came hard with tha personals, but i think pleim won in that category. or i dunno, it was close. this battle was more of personals from both of yall. yo intro was nice, but i feel your intro bar wasnt complete. tha second line was wack to me. u got skillz tho.
pleim-u got mad skillz also. i was lovin yo intro also. creative and nicely worded. i liked ur structure thru-out this whole verse. but i also feel u fell off near tha end, but u came hard with tha punches. personals were hard too, this was a close battle.
overall-i think this was a close battle. i think yall came neck and neck and was mad prepared. but i think pleim came off a lil harder.

BREAKDOWN:
OPENER:pleim
Rhyming:Pleim
Structure:Pleim
Personals:Killah Bwoy
Punches:Pleim
Closer:Killah Bwoy
Overall:Pleim

this was close. Not hate Killah....sry....


plz RTF on battle in sig...............1...........

Pleim 01-16-05 03:44 AM

why yu change ya name dawg? pure bitch move sun

vote more

Optimus 01-16-05 05:56 AM

This was feedback posted for Pleim
 
cant be bothered to vote...but the way i see it pleim won...killah had way too many played lines, and pleims punchs hit harder..

God 01-16-05 01:24 PM

Voted For: Killah.Bwoy

pretty decent battle but ima have to give this one to Konfliktz

Kon
Fuck You, Dawg, Cummin At Me..Better Luck Bustin a Nut..
I Swear On My Life, I'll take Your ass Cheeks, and Glue Them Shut..
pretty decent opener
That Eliminates my Job, Now I Don't Have to "Shit On You"..
Crush Your House, What You Gon Tell The Judge, I cut Your trashbin in two?
LOL!!!
Face It Kid, Your Hands The Closest thing your gettin to pussy..
How Can Killah Fall off, When I Got mini Mouse tryna push-me..
not feeling it
Pop! Pop! Naww That Aint The Gun, Thats your Mom Thirsty Again..
Kid can't seem to miss the target, Shame, he alwayz aims for the rear end..
decent
I Release Shaq Attacks, Fuck L.A, Like Your Team, You Fell Off..
And I Aint talkin bout church when I sound The Bells Off..
Okay , closer but coud have been better 7.5/10

Pleim
Listen ya fake azz vet, i show no remorse at all
See imma rob KB..............with NO toys involved
LOLZ. NICE opener
You been here forever and still no respect? shit
Say you the "underdog"....but thats just a bitch
not feeling it
Look son, all of your punches are at such a void
I'd think a fag like you could at least spell "boy"
NIce
You suck homeboy,what else you need to learn?
Whatchu gunna do Wendy's voters see you served?
Decent
It's over, and it's done, what else do I gotta say?
You're just a nerd who averages 55 posts a day!
Nice personal , but could have been better 7/10

Close battle but Konflitz took this one by alittle bit good battle both , keep it up

Vote- Konflitz

K.ontroverz.Y 01-16-05 01:27 PM

umm i changed my name because killah bwoy is mad old

kid its not a bitch move i dont need to change my name to merk you.

you aint no challenge. nuff said

Pleim 01-16-05 02:36 PM

im not a challenege yet i am close in the votes :laugh:

uppin yall, real voters

K.ontroverz.Y 01-16-05 08:24 PM

its only 2-1 thats not close fuckin retard..........


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