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.MictoriouS. vs Kordozar
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Swaying All Votes Be Explained 4 Lines Each Competitor............. Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 01-15-05 at 12:10 AM Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in. |
Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-05 11:42 PM.
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.MictoriouS. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-05 11:44 PM.
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Kid Talks Ta Him Self,So We Know He's Gay..
Can't Get A Fair Win,Thass Why His Votes Are Swayed.. I'll Hold His Wins Ta A Minimun Amount Like His Posts Per Day.. Go Away,Cus Mictorious Would Never Suceed... He Stood Up Ta Chaos,But Fell Ta His Knees... Leave This Kid Feed,And He Still Won't Be Eating.. Tha Closets He'll Get Ta Dope Iss Drug Addict Meetings.. Won't Leave Me Bleeding,He Have No Real Punches.. ..............And He's All Pussi Like Female Brunches.... I'll Leave You Lump Kid,Like Notre Dame's Hunch Iss.... |
Uppin His Verse....................
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Mic's Lyrical-Sword will leave Zar stopp'd like I was Pullin-His-Kord
The judges could give him a |hand-job| and still not be |feelin-him-more| Everyone knows your-not-great...Like 'voters both agreeing i won' dawg theres-no-debate.. cuz like "unconfident girls about there bodys"...you Just Think Your A heavyweight...|| I'll come to a Michigan orphanage, and i'll be killin' a bunch.. Cuz like "Victorious kickboxers", I'll "KO" this rookie "without a punch.." I Corbra-Clutch pussies like u with surgical precision and have u gagged and face-masked wit hollow tips,leaving ur neck wit split-decisions yous gettin slayed-apart, watch me reck this bitch wit heat thatll open him cuz kord's chances of winnin are |slimmer| than |anorecsick-ethiopians |
Uppin this ... right now .. :]
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Uppin Thiss Shit........................
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Voted For: Kordozar
ah good battle....very close battle Kordozar Kid Talks Ta Him Self,So We Know He's Gay.. Can't Get A Fair Win,Thass Why His Votes Are Swayed.. I'll Hold His Wins Ta A Minimun Amount Like His Posts Per Day.. ^^^that was an alright punch. good wordplay included in it. i'd give it a 7/10 cuz one line in their was a little streched. Go Away,Cus Mictorious Would Never Suceed... He Stood Up Ta Chaos,But Fell Ta His Knees... ^^^^nice idea, nice punch, could've worded it better doe.. 8/10 Leave This Kid Feed,And He Still Won't Be Eating.. Tha Closets He'll Get Ta Dope Iss Drug Addict Meetings.. ^^^decent punch, nice wordplay, second line didnt go wit the first one doe man Won't Leave Me Bleeding,He Have No Real Punches.. ..............And He's All Pussi Like Female Brunches.... I'll Leave You Lump Kid,Like Notre Dame's Hunch Iss.... ^^^ur best lines of your whole battle was ur closing which is a plus (+). 10/10 closing. very good closing Mictorious Mic's Lyrical-Sword will leave Zar stopp'd like I was Pullin-His-Kord The judges could give him a |hand-job| and still not be |feelin-him-more| ^^^very good punch, nice multis and wordplays. nice intro man, 9/10 Everyone knows your-not-great...Like 'voters both agreeing i won' dawg theres-no-debate.. cuz like "unconfident girls about there bodys"...you Just Think Your A heavyweight...|| ^^^ahhhh....couldve been worded betta, but nice idea and good punch...8/10 I'll come to a Michigan orphanage, and i'll be killin' a bunch.. Cuz like "Victorious kickboxers", I'll "KO" this rookie "without a punch.." ^^^its aite, but the second line saved you, because that first line was ass man, 6/10 I Corbra-Clutch pussies like u with surgical precision and have u gagged and face-masked wit hollow tips,leaving ur neck wit split-decisions ^^^great usage of words, but the second line was streched man....work on dat...but it was good wordplay 8.5/10 yous gettin slayed-apart, watch me reck this bitch wit heat thatll open him cuz kord's chances of winnin are |slimmer| than |anorecsick-ethiopians ^^^dat was a hot closing. the second line was really good truss me. ill give it 9/10 man basically in the end it came down to punches and the closing of the verses. i think the punches went to mictorious but K's closing was way betta. so i had to go to structure and K had betta structure man and his wording was betta, but Mic had betta wordplay and multis. so personals went to no one. but i think K took dis one only because of structure man! v/Kordozar |
Voted For: .MictoriouS.
dayum........mictorious......... opener-kordozar closer-mictorious punches-mictorious personals-kordozar structure-kordozar flow-kordozar creativity-mictorious enjoyment-mictorious \V/-Mictorious this was hella close Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: .MictoriouS.
pretty good battle here Mictorious............ Mic's Lyrical-Sword will leave Zar stopp'd like I was Pullin-His-Kord The judges could give him a |hand-job| and still not be |feelin-him-more| decent opener....hit hard....good wordplay....6/10 Everyone knows your-not-great...Like 'voters both agreeing i won' dawg theres-no-debate.. cuz like "unconfident girls about there bodys"...you Just Think Your A heavyweight...|| good concept....hit hard again....good bar.....7/10 I'll come to a Michigan orphanage, and i'll be killin' a bunch.. Cuz like "Victorious kickboxers", I'll "KO" this rookie "without a punch.." didnt like the set up line.....2nd line was nice......5/10 I Corbra-Clutch pussies like u with surgical precision and have u gagged and face-masked wit hollow tips,leaving ur neck wit split-decisions lol....good bar....i usually dont like gunplay in a punch....but this was nice.....8/10 yous gettin slayed-apart, watch me reck this bitch wit heat thatll open him cuz kord's chances of winnin are |slimmer| than |anorecsick-ethiopians decent....kinda played.....4/10 30/50................................ Kordozar............. Kid Talks Ta Him Self,So We Know He's Gay.. Can't Get A Fair Win,Thass Why His Votes Are Swayed.. I'll Hold His Wins Ta A Minimun Amount Like His Posts Per Day.. never use a bar with 3 lines.....1st line was horrible....2nd line was decent...and 3rd line was a pretty good personal.......8/15 Go Away,Cus Mictorious Would Never Suceed... He Stood Up Ta Chaos,But Fell Ta His Knees... ok personal....could have been worded better....sut still decent....6/10 Leave This Kid Feed,And He Still Won't Be Eating.. Tha Closets He'll Get Ta Dope Iss Drug Addict Meetings.. hmm ok.....5/10 Won't Leave Me Bleeding,He Have No Real Punches.. ..............And He's All Pussi Like Female Brunches.... I'll Leave You Lump Kid,Like Notre Dame's Hunch Iss.... again...3lines in a bar...not good......1st line ok...2nd line....better.....3rd line....not feelin it......8/15 27/50........................... i felt like the was a pretty close battle....but mic got it...his punches were more complex that kordozars....kordozar came with harder personals....but overall mic got it with consistency....there were a couple lines i wasnt feelin from kor.......good battle from both though.....no hate in this vote.....rtf |
Voted For: Kordozar
aight i gota go with u fam...bcuzz u had a betta structure shit was easier da read...ya verse was kind of basic but u ahd a few persoanls is there so dat help u take dis shit..mic fix ya structure fam shit was all ova da place nahmean...ya secnobd bar was type hott but dat was it no personals u had a few multis but i wasn't feelin dem really...so kord took dis with a good structure and personals.. return it...ya'll |
Voted For: .MictoriouS.
.Mictorious. Nice Vocabulary Man, Always Come With Hot Vocabulary, Structure Was Decent Like How You Split Up Every Bar Coz There Is Illiterate Heads Here, Punches Was On Target And Hitting...Also Had Some Good Multi's In Here Like Every Line Had Multi's That Was Good For This Battle, Alot Of Meta's In This Verse, Basically This Was Your Battle Already Made Coz The Punches, WordPlay,Meta's And Multi's Was All You...9/10 Kordozar Ish Was Alright Nothing Special Had Some Punches In There Vocabulary Was Way Basic, Come On Now That's On Some Newbies Ish, Meta's Need Work...Alot Of Work...Not Multi's Here That Cozzed Your Lost In This Battle, Also Your Structure Was Stupid, What's With The Whole Line Of Dots??? Anyway Multi's Meta's And Vocab Needs Work.....6.5/10 Vote-.Mictorious. For Punches, Personals, Multi's Meta's Structure And Vocabulary....All Done Decent Nuff Said One(One) |
Aye Bitch Ass Nigga Dont Vote In Mih Shit,Stop With That Hatin Shit Queer Ass Coward...................
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Voted For: Kordozar
iight i got alot to say now J.R freeze and mictorious Structre Bad as shit man y'all can't find a way to make ur structure normal cause that throws ur flow off so much u need to work on the punches allright by mictorious and ur personals fell alot and got up a lil flow was bad like i said and structure very very unpleaseing [font=tahoma[kordozar u had normal structure good flow liked it and yeah ur punches we're better personals we're strong at start and began to fall off but u had the beter i liked most of ur lines and i think u really deserve this battle alot cause u had nice stuff all overn the place good battle yall better punches n personals and structure and flow allaround better verse for kordozar on my oppinion good battle folk, 1[/font] |
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