50hater_killer mic
 

I know that this game has brought me nothin execpt my wanna be fame,
every battle I have been in seems like everyone want to put me to shaime.
The racism here in the USA has no terroist execpt for the KKK.
Sept 11 was nothin but a hit but now we are keepin our troops in harms way.
I started out on this game as the kkk_hater,
but everyone told me I was not getting any better.
So as I bring my lyrics into town,
I know that I have been finding my soul in these chains bound.
So I hand down this mike.
For I only can not bare this fight,
so I end these lines saying,
be the one fighitng or do'nt be haten.

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wut u sayin u out or somethin??????

uppin for feedback!!!!!!!!!

i dont know about this one. Yo structure wasnt there fam. u had some stretched lines. i think u should just keep battlin people, so u can elevate, cause i started out just like that. your rhymes were a lil simple, and ur barz were stretched. oh, i said that, but i wasnt feelin this. i dont know what tha moral of this was. i dont know what to tell u about this one. u should elevate more, and practice. this wasnt hot to me...sry fam...u still got skillz tho....................1