Skriptz vs hang-man
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Biting
3-0 = KO

Minimum posts to vote: 170

Check in by: 01-16-05 at 12:02 AM

Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in.

Win by 3-0 KO

hang-man has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-05 11:35 PM.

Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-05 11:36 PM.

i bruise ya faggot verse,relentless punches cover ya eyes with mier bars
and i'll prove this fag is garbage when i metaphorically commencin condoms like penetration to wombs(wounds) so just embrace ya magnum scars(DANM just embrace it) 1

Skriptz known to leave a battle scene redder then the brake lights at a traffic jam
i bet Skriptz really hates life cuz he could have 50% enlargment on ya balls N u still couldnt equal up to half a man (no where near it buddy) 2

only way u's gifted, if ya punches effect me after rippin u'r musculs cartiledges
ya barely markin hits,ya bars concepts played out,if converted to games they'd be cartridges(oh yes it's true bitch) 3

i'ma deal wit this bastard quick,his verse will be all recycled so he's more then just trash
if he ever spit flames then someone must've splashed him cuz right now all i see is rainin ash (damn dogg u got dusted in here bitch) 4

u trashed like ya garbage,monodisastrous, hang-man will obligate u whacked like ya bars is
u can't hide from the carnage cuz like exhaustion from practicin gay intercourse this fags just been beat by spar hits (it's over,it's finished,you've been got ) 5

Voted For: Skriptz

ok

skriptz........
This kid is thick as a forest. . .and so wack kid made me key
This herb likes the bush. . .so he campaigned to save the trees
lol....nice opener....shit hit hard

Hang-man punches won’t connect. . .like phones that’s all tied up
Kid practically packing nothing. . .like hockey goalies with no cups
lol another nice punch.....good shit

Hang-man wouldn’t get his gayass name across. . .if he scraped a car. . .
. . . . . . . . . .with keys
Kid you is going head to head Skriptz. . .that means get on both knees
decent....hit good

This little bitch can throw punches. . .it can’t hit so it will repeat the. . .
. . . . . . . . . .same hit
This herb. . .can’t flow so he has to recycle of what he spits
good personal.......pretty good closer


Hang Man.................

i bruise ya faggot verse,relentless punches cover ya eyes with mier bars
and i'll prove this fag is garbage when i metaphorically commencin condoms like penetration to wombs(wounds) so just embrace ya magnum scars(DANM just embrace it) 1
damn shit is streched....good vocab....ok opener

Skriptz known to leave a battle scene redder then the brake lights at a traffic jam
i bet Skriptz really hates life cuz he could have 50% enlargment on ya balls N u still couldnt equal up to half a man (no where near it buddy) 2
wasnt feelin it.............

only way u's gifted, if ya punches effect me after rippin u'r musculs cartiledges
ya barely markin hits,ya bars concepts played out,if converted to games they'd be cartridges(oh yes it's true bitch) 3
decent...........hit pretty good

i'ma deal wit this bastard quick,his verse will be all recycled so he's more then just trash
if he ever spit flames then someone must've splashed him cuz right now all i see is rainin ash (damn dogg u got dusted in here bitch) 4
couldve been worded better......good concept but just didnt come through


u trashed like ya garbage,monodisastrous, hang-man will obligate u whacked like ya bars is
u can't hide from the carnage cuz like exhaustion from practicin gay intercourse this fags just been beat by spar hits (it's over,it's finished,you've been got ) 5
gay jokes played


basically...........skriptz took this with a more consistent hard hitting verse.....punches hit harder....personals were better....hang had better vocab...but thats it......skriptz just had an overall better verse

Aight thanks yo.......uppin

Voted For: Skriptz

gotta go with skriptz....this was pretty much one sided...and hang-man......ur too conceited.....at the end of all ur bars u always had a comment about urself to follow.......that is a no-no........u need ta work on that...skriptz had some good punches..........structure was nasty as fuck though...same with hang-man.....elevate on that........the onli good punch in hang-mans verse was the last one....still wasnt that good though....skriptz got this though becuz of the punches....thats how i see it......

\V/-skriptz

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up...............

Voted For: Skriptz



i bruise ya faggot verse,relentless punches cover ya eyes with mier bars
and i'll prove this fag is garbage when i metaphorically commencin condoms like penetration to wombs(wounds) so just embrace ya magnum scars(DANM just embrace it) 1

Skriptz known to leave a battle scene redder then the brake lights at a traffic jam
i bet Skriptz really hates life cuz he could have 50% enlargment on ya balls N u still couldnt equal up to half a man (no where near it buddy) 2

only way u's gifted, if ya punches effect me after rippin u'r musculs cartiledges
ya barely markin hits,ya bars concepts played out,if converted to games they'd be cartridges(oh yes it's true bitch) 3

i'ma deal wit this bastard quick,his verse will be all recycled so he's more then just trash
if he ever spit flames then someone must've splashed him cuz right now all i see is rainin ash (damn dogg u got dusted in here bitch) 4

u trashed like ya garbage,monodisastrous, hang-man will obligate u whacked like ya bars is
u can't hide from the carnage cuz like exhaustion from practicin gay intercourse this fags just been beat by spar hits (it's over,it's finished,you've been got ) 5
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Call your self an dictionary, you had some good vocab in your verse. Punches was alright needs elevate, struture was not good, messing up the reading flow too. Personals didnt see none. Wordplay was eh ok. Meta'z was good.







This kid is thick as a forest. . .and so wack kid made me key
This herb likes the bush. . .so he campaigned to save the trees
Hang-man punches won’t connect. . .like phones that’s all tied up
Kid practically packing nothing. . .like hockey goalies with no cups
Hang-man wouldn’t get his gayass name across. . .if he scraped a car. . .
. . . . . . . . . .with keys
Kid you is going head to head Skriptz. . .that means get on both knees
This little bitch can throw punches. . .it can’t hit so it will repeat the. . .
. . . . . . . . . .same hit
This herb. . .can’t flow so he has to recycle of what he spits
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ All right, nice punches. Flow was good. Meta'z was decent and also the wordplay.





Overall= This battle is one-sided, Hang-man nice vocabs, with some metaphors your good doing that. Except punches, your punches wasnt really that effective, elevate homie. Skriptz you had some good effective punches, with some good wordplay and meta'z. I have to give this to skriptz, he came harder with the punches.No hate.


peace

Voted For: Skriptz

skriptz gets my vote by default cos hang-man went way over the line limit.