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Dirty Nigga 01-16-05 05:32 PM

oh no!
 
you in the country, an round these here parts they call me ''dixie normis''...
i only fuck with ''trick performers'' an record the orgasms for my chorus...
you niggas need a theasaurus just ta keep up with my down south grammar...
you should call me ''judge'' cause of the way i cock that hammer...
i done time in the slammer, so i know all about ''bars''...
an dicks stay on your lips like suge with cuban cigars...
u niggas about 10 under par, so i think i'll let u swing...
cause if i swang the first punch, u'd be seein stars an ya eyes like ''Kachiiiing''...
i pull ''dat ting'' n sit back mon an smoke de ganja...
its like you just been adoptedcause of the way i son-ya...biiiiitch...


Hook:
I'm number 1 with a bullet, when you had the chance u should pull-it...
cause now i'm hot, on top, never flop, my shits locked, ready ta pop...
when i cock you niggas stop an scream ''oh nooooo''

Verse 2:
oh no, my flooow, got you bouncin like a lolo..
lets go, i got a show, must go...but while im on stage u can say hello..
...to my lil friend called a hollow tip...
you rap niggas remind me of a hooker cause of the way you follow dick..
ya flows is stinkin, did you swallow shit?
i rhyme off wit an you rhyme off a nursery...
if you ever try ''crusin'' me...i'll retaliate with a hex..
the way i knock down emcees you would think i work at maccie d'z cause i'm always servin an sayin ''neeeeext''
my text is hotter then a dirty message on your cellie...
i'll cut ya face with razors so ya sportin bandaids like nelly..
i aint r kelly, but i'll tape a bitch n sell it on ebay...
an no, i did not rape that bitch!! fuck what she-say (haha)

Hook:
I'm number 1 with a bullet, when you had the chance u should pull-it...
cause now i'm hot, on top, never flop, my shits locked, ready ta pop...
when i cock you niggas stop an scream ''oh nooooo''

Dirty Nigga 01-17-05 08:37 AM

feed? uppin folk.....

~Lady Fiya~ 01-17-05 12:57 PM

ha you had a nice flow was feeling the first verse.. shit was hilarious

you niggas need a theasaurus just ta keep up with my down south grammar...
you should call me ''judge'' cause of the way i cock that hammer...
i done time in the slammer, so i know all about ''bars''...
an dicks stay on your lips like suge with cuban cigars...
^^lol @ the suge and cuban cigars.. hee hee lol.. the last verse was kinda funny too, structure is whoa, but the flow was on point and the content was nice.. so...... :thumbup: keep droppin, pimpin' lol...

50hater_killer 01-17-05 01:13 PM

I liked it yea it was pretty good and hilariouse in my mind also homes good job hit up on my open mic link peace.

9/10

you in the country, an round these here parts they call me ''dixie normis''...
i only fuck with ''trick performers'' an record the orgasms for my chorus...
you niggas need a theasaurus just ta keep up with my down south grammar...
you should call me ''judge'' cause of the way i cock that hammer...


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