notorious verses vs Black Queen
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-16-05 at 10:23 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-16-05 09:54 PM.

Notorious Verses has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-16-05 10:15 PM.

I don’t mean to be cruel, but I don’t even need to half-ass
Nobody really cares about your ass like a GED English class
Im takin this, so make like cannibal snakes and swallow your end
I mean how all the vets left, we just hope you follow the trend
Truth is my sound is ill, but nobody wants to hear ya flow
You been on the net forever faggot!.and still got nothin to show?
How can these faggots be ill?..all the textees he beat were new
And quit talkin about amounts of skill, THATS between me and you
Its torcher what im doin to this herb, Ive already topped ya diss..
Even judged by motivational speakers ya still wont get a vote of confidence
His net presence in text is a shame time to take you outta the limelight
Cuz you been exposin more 'gay bars' to us than San Fransico nightlife
Droppin a battle verse? Your sure to 'go down swingin', herb..
That means you like 'givin head on playgrounds' in lamens terms
Bitch, biting my clothin style is the only way ya 'matchin me'..so plz quit
Im postin 1st, yet id never feed off ya verse..since I refuse to eat shit
I got em scared, his heart beatin faster than doin home aerobics
and if I was ever scared of Notorious its cause I was homo-phobic

Chick Has "No Sense Of Reality", Dis Bitch Beatin N.Verses?...C'mon Sis*
Da Queen Clearly Has No Respect Fo "Hip Hop", So Her Ass Voted Fo Skriptz*
Similar Traits?...Na Ma Im Da "Red King", Is Dat Familiar To Ya
Cuz Even Da Girl In Ya Sig Symbolizes "Murder" Fo Ya*
Enough Wit Da Sharades, Claims She Ko's All Bitches But Yet She's "Laid"
Ma, To Tell Ya Da Truth, A "Black Queen" Only Means Sumfin Wen Playin Spades
6-0? Impressive...Na Try 19-4....Broke Dis Whore Reference Dat Used To Reside In Authentik Intelligence
Now Unless U Condaleeza Rice, I Don Understand How A Black Queen Is In A "Twizted Government"
Face Facts Ma Even In The Card Game's U Play, Da King Ranks Higher Than U
Traitor?...Hell Yea, She Played C.A.L.I Mad Nuff, But Noe She Want In On His Crew
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172452
GET OFF MY DICK, I Went To Strikly Hood-U Followed, Twizted Government-Da Sig U Borrowed
I Swear, Ur On My PRICK So Much, Ull B Pregnant By TOMORROW!
So Wats Ur Next Motive, Explosives?...Na "Black Queen" Da Deck Is Gone...
Call Lady Fiya, She Da Next Queen-Cuz Dis Bitch Has Been DETHRONED!

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No Sense Of Reality Is Her Open Mic Song
Works Two Ways...Think- Hip Hop Had A Battle Wit Skriptz And She Voted Fo Skriptz
Ashanti (in her sig) Is Signed To "Murder" Inc.

Voted For: Notorious Verses

my vote---notorious
Both was really good but I had to give it to him because he had more personal punchs. She could have said that shit to any1, he made he's up based upon her sig and shit like that. I give him a 9/10 and hers a 7/10.

Voted For: Black Queen

she came harder and she was easier to read on this one. she rhymed more and ur lines where just to stretched homes no hate tho and most of all her opener-closure was better,
she had more multis better vocab more wordplay and structure was better.

opener-black
closure-black
multis-black
personals_black
vocab-black
over all black


queen
I don’t mean to be cruel, but I don’t even need to half-ass
Nobody really cares about your ass like a GED English class
Im takin this, so make like cannibal snakes and swallow your end
I mean how all the vets left, we just hope you follow the trend
Truth is my sound is ill, but nobody wants to hear ya flow
You been on the net forever faggot!.and still got nothin to show?
How can these faggots be ill?..all the textees he beat were new
And quit talkin about amounts of skill, THATS between me and you
Its torcher what im doin to this herb, Ive already topped ya diss..
Even judged by motivational speakers ya still wont get a vote of confidence
His net presence in text is a shame time to take you outta the limelight
Cuz you been exposin more 'gay bars' to us than San Fransico nightlife

8/10

no

Chick Has "No Sense Of Reality", Dis Bitch Beatin N.Verses?...C'mon Sis*
Da Queen Clearly Has No Respect Fo "Hip Hop", So Her Ass Voted Fo Skriptz*
Similar Traits?...Na Ma Im Da "Red King", Is Dat Familiar To Ya
Cuz Even Da Girl In Ya Sig Symbolizes "Murder" Fo Ya*
Enough Wit Da Sharades, Claims She Ko's All Bitches But Yet She's "Laid"
Ma, To Tell Ya Da Truth, A "Black Queen" Only Means Sumfin Wen Playin Spades
6-0? Impressive...Na Try 19-4....Broke Dis Whore Reference Dat Used To Reside In Authentik Intelligence
Now Unless U Condaleeza Rice, I Don Understand How A Black Queen Is In A "Twizted Government"
Face Facts Ma Even In The Card Game's U Play, Da King Ranks Higher Than U
Traitor?...Hell Yea, She Played C.A.L.I Mad Nuff, But Noe She Want In On His Crew

6.5/10

hit up on my links peace

Voted For: Notorious Verses

Ok I vote for u cuz u had way better mulitis and personals then queen plus punches were like ohhhhh lol but anyways ur verse was like a lil better then heres but not by much and black queen dont get me wrong but u did good too but u need to elavate like a lil bit more and u have this no problem so my overall vote goes to



Vote goes to............. Notorious Verses.

This was feedback posted for Notorious Verses
 

dude...u battled ur crewmate...anyways tight verse.....

Voted For: Notorious Verses

I don’t mean to be cruel, but I don’t even need to half-ass
Nobody really cares about your ass like a GED English class
aight flow, not a good opener or punch..
Im takin this, so make like cannibal snakes and swallow your end
I mean how all the vets left, we just hope you follow the trend
the first half was sic, the last half was NOT a diss..
Truth is my sound is ill, but nobody wants to hear ya flow
You been on the net forever faggot!.and still got nothin to show?
aight personal, coulda been better…
How can these faggots be ill?..all the textees he beat were new
And quit talkin about amounts of skill, THATS between me and you
nice punch, the second could be a diss to yourself however..
Its torcher what im doin to this herb, Ive already topped ya diss..
Even judged by motivational speakers ya still wont get a vote of confidence
stretched… not hard hitting..
His net presence in text is a shame time to take you outta the limelight
Cuz you been exposin more 'gay bars' to us than San Fransico nightlife
best bar in your verse lmao…
Droppin a battle verse? Your sure to 'go down swingin', herb..
That means you like 'givin head on playgrounds' in lamens terms
stretched meta… no good.. Not personal whatsoever..
Bitch, biting my clothin style is the only way ya 'matchin me'..so plz quit
Im postin 1st, yet id never feed off ya verse..since I refuse to eat shit
first half is decent… shit lines are played but the second half was aight..
I got em scared, his heart beatin faster than doin home aerobics
and if I was ever scared of Notorious its cause I was homo-phobic
aight closer, the only other personal u had in here

I believe I voted on one of your battles before, Black Queen and it seems you still got a lotta filler lines.. You can use any of your lines on someone and just put their name in it.. You got a few unique personals.. Which I pointed out.. But your punches were VERY weak.. Ya flow was very good and metas were good but you need to make them into effective punches… but it was a decent verse overall… :thumbup:

Chick Has "No Sense Of Reality", Dis Bitch Beatin N.Verses?...C'mon Sis*
Da Queen Clearly Has No Respect Fo "Hip Hop", So Her Ass Voted Fo Skriptz*
^^^best opener, and best personal so far…lol
Similar Traits?...Na Ma Im Da "Red King", Is Dat Familiar To Ya
Cuz Even Da Girl In Ya Sig Symbolizes "Murder" Fo Ya*
^^nice.. Effective punch followed by a personal..
Enough Wit Da Sharades, Claims She Ko's All Bitches But Yet She's "Laid"
Ma, To Tell Ya Da Truth, A "Black Queen" Only Means Sumfin Wen Playin Spades
another nice personal.. Lmfao.. Nice multis.. Lines almost stretch tho
6-0? Impressive...Na Try 19-4....Broke Dis Whore Reference Dat Used To Reside In Authentik Intelligence
Now Unless U Condaleeza Rice, I Don Understand How A Black Queen Is In A "Twizted Government"
ya flow fa this was a lil’ messed up.. But nice personal nonetheless.. Lmao
Face Facts Ma Even In The Card Game's U Play, Da King Ranks Higher Than U
Traitor?...Hell Yea, She Played C.A.L.I Mad Nuff, But Noe She Want In On His Crew
BEST BAR in the battle.. This punch took the battle in my opinion..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172452
GET OFF MY DICK, I Went To Strikly Hood-U Followed, Twizted Government-Da Sig U Borrowed
I Swear, Ur On My PRICK So Much, Ull B Pregnant By TOMORROW!
another tight punch..second half was sic.. First half almost stretched playa
So Wats Ur Next Motive, Explosives?...Na "Black Queen" Da Deck Is Gone...
Call Lady Fiya, She Da Next Queen-Cuz Dis Bitch Has Been DETHRONED!
I disregarded ths bar since my name is in here.. First half still the best closer

Aight for yours… you had personals throughout the battle.. Which gave you the upper hand, your flow was consistent but fell off somewhere in the middle.. You brought some creative punches.. I seen a few multis. And ya metas were original.. You had sum faults I mentioned like stretching ya bars fa no reason.. Type in Times New Roman.. Not arial.. It makes ya verse look extra large and run on the next line.. This was pretty one-sided you had the punches and personals to take this battle in a possible KO.. Stay up and work on ya errors and both of you should be fine.. Nice battle you two..

v/Notorious Verses…

Voted For: Notorious Verses

Notorios Verses came to ill for u ma black queen has recieved her first loss this is a future vet right here u can't play gmaes ur punches were weaker than ever i never seen u had lacxked meta's and ur personals diddint get u any were notorious on the other hand got on u faster than a homless guy on the twisted government sig now you had a better verse punches connected well not all but most did thats what i judge the hitting and if u had none illjudge that lol notorious wins for haveing a more experteece spit ok......

Voted For: Notorious Verses


Openor=Nv Hard Punch
Strukture=Tie Both Easy Ta Read
Punches=Nv Had Harder Punches
Personals=Tie Both Had Ok Personals
Vokab=Tie,Good Vokab
Clolser=Nv Good Punch And Personal

Nv Had Better Punches Personals And Wordplay..

/V NotoriousVerses.................