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Kordozar vs Roy Merkem
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 Ko 4-1 Tko Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 01-17-05 at 12:20 AM Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in. Win by KO |
Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-16-05 11:45 PM.
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Roy Merkem has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-16-05 11:47 PM.
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His Hand On His Sack And Than His Seed Lands On A Napkin..
Lilcutieboi=Queer,If Homo's Wass A Football Team Than He'd Be Tha Captain.. You Hot?We'll I'll Turn Ya Iceman Like George Gervin.. Lil M.o.h Kid You Hurtin,Likes Men So He Lets Roy Merkem.. Confused If He's In Tha Closet Or Not So He ? His Location.. Hides Tha Stats,Cus Dude Has More L's On His Rekord Than A Radio Station.. Overdozed On Coke,Is What Makes Him Doper Than You.. Ya Onli Chances Of Beatin Me Iss Havin All Mih Votes Removed.. ...............Try A Dq And Ya Still Wont Be Victorious.. Kid Askin Fa A Battle But Won't Stand A Chance Like Mictorious.. Explanations...... 2nd Line Lilcutie Boi=Aim Name Geroge Gervin Aka Iceman Moh Money On Hand ? His Location Hides His Rekord Under His Avy Says Doper Than You L's On His Rekord,Lyrics On Rekord Radio Stations Have Tha Most I Beat Mictorious...... |
Take you That Long To Pre-Write...
Aight Check it. Deturming by your flow I will rip you apart leaving you with nothing but bones....... By your rhymes I can tell your Dirt, I guess we can call you Fred Flinstone...... I guess since you watch cartoons so much, You wont make it very far..... After I blow you out, I will leave ya body like daffy on ya avatar.... I guess how you act you toss gay man salads to make a hit... You have Gay money..I guess thats why you talk alot of shit.... Open your mouf with that salad thing makes us not listen to what you say... Smoking that Crack, I guess Thats Why you look like Flavor Flav when he was Back in Da Day.. Im like a lyrical disease about to sneak into one of your tiny leave open cuts... So I guess I can feel sorry for you..Because your just a squirrel looking for a NUT... If you Dont get the salad tossing Thing..Just leave the Site..lol |
My Record is 7-1 Boy....I had a More higher But I reset it..To Start All OVer...O well'' Uppin
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Aktually I Had Ta Leave,And Ya Shit Wass Wack Uppin Fa Votes.............
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just Like ya sig and yo avy..Nikka, You IMed me to just get my Screen Name..Lol ok uppin
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Called A Personal Cus.............................
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Voted For: Kordozar
lol no explanation needed, one sided battle punches- K personals- K, RM u had not one personal structure- both were easy to read closing- K By your rhymes I can tell your Dirt, I guess we can call you Fred Flinstone...... ^^^^wat da fuck was dat....lol |
You Musta Didnt read it Right...Uppin.............
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This was feedback posted for Kordozar
ehh this wasnt too good of a battle.....
Kordozar........ His Hand On His Sack And Than His Seed Lands On A Napkin.. Lilcutieboi=Queer,If Homo's Wass A Football Team Than He'd Be Tha Captain.. decent opener.....gay jokes are kinda played You Hot?We'll I'll Turn Ya Iceman Like George Gervin.. Lil M.o.h Kid You Hurtin,Likes Men So He Lets Roy Merkem.. decent bar...hit ok.... Confused If He's In Tha Closet Or Not So He ? His Location.. Hides Tha Stats,Cus Dude Has More L's On His Rekord Than A Radio Station.. best bar here....good personal....hit hard...... Overdozed On Coke,Is What Makes Him Doper Than You.. Ya Onli Chances Of Beatin Me Iss Havin All Mih Votes Removed.. 1st line was a good personal...2nd line was ok... ...............Try A Dq And Ya Still Wont Be Victorious.. Kid Askin Fa A Battle But Won't Stand A Chance Like Mictorious.. ehh ok closer...not that good...kinda self glory here Roy merkem................. Deturming by your flow I will rip you apart leaving you with nothing but bones....... By your rhymes I can tell your Dirt, I guess we can call you Fred Flinstone...... ok opener....set up line sucked....hit ok I guess since you watch cartoons so much, You wont make it very far..... After I blow you out, I will leave ya body like daffy on ya avatar.... set up line again was garbage...2nd line ok...not that good I guess how you act you toss gay man salads to make a hit... You have Gay money..I guess thats why you talk alot of shit.... good attempt at wordplay....could have been worded better....prolly your best bar here Open your mouf with that salad thing makes us not listen to what you say... Smoking that Crack, I guess Thats Why you look like Flavor Flav when he was Back in Da Day.. not too good..... Im like a lyrical disease about to sneak into one of your tiny leave open cuts... So I guess I can feel sorry for you..Because your just a squirrel looking for a NUT... not a good closer...wasnt feelin it at all.... kordozar takes this easily with an overall better verse....his verse was on a whole different level.......better punches....and better personals.......RETURN THE FAVOR PLEASE!!!!!!!! link in sig ahh shit....i cant vote...not enough posts....damn...oh well....this is what i thought of the battle even though it dont count..... |
O well if you Win you Win....Nice Battle....I cant be the best At everything.Nice battle Kid,
I hate when People Call me kid so I won't Say it to nobody anymore |
so explain it to me den man, mayb ur outlook on it is different from mine
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Voted For: Kordozar
Deturming by your flow I will rip you apart leaving you with nothing but bones....... By your rhymes I can tell your Dirt, I guess we can call you Fred Flinstone...... I guess since you watch cartoons so much, You wont make it very far..... After I blow you out, I will leave ya body like daffy on ya avatar.... I guess how you act you toss gay man salads to make a hit... You have Gay money..I guess thats why you talk alot of shit.... Open your mouf with that salad thing makes us not listen to what you say... Smoking that Crack, I guess Thats Why you look like Flavor Flav when he was Back in Da Day.. Im like a lyrical disease about to sneak into one of your tiny leave open cuts... So I guess I can feel sorry for you..Because your just a squirrel looking for a NUT... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Lol,The flavor flave line and the closer was dope fam, nice punches. Throughout the whole verse though, ya had some personals,punches (not that decent) flow was kinda chopped up fam,work on struture.Salad line, was creative,nice. His Hand On His Sack And Than His Seed Lands On A Napkin.. Lilcutieboi=Queer,If Homo's Wass A Football Team Than He'd Be Tha Captain.. You Hot?We'll I'll Turn Ya Iceman Like George Gervin.. Lil M.o.h Kid You Hurtin,Likes Men So He Lets Roy Merkem.. Confused If He's In Tha Closet Or Not So He ? His Location.. Hides Tha Stats,Cus Dude Has More L's On His Rekord Than A Radio Station.. Overdozed On Coke,Is What Makes Him Doper Than You.. Ya Onli Chances Of Beatin Me Iss Havin All Mih Votes Removed.. ...............Try A Dq And Ya Still Wont Be Victorious.. Kid Askin Fa A Battle But Won't Stand A Chance Like Mictorious.. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ok, nice punches,good flow,and personals (dissing his aim name) Punches were creative, and good wordplay too overall=This is kinda a close battle, both threw some good punches and personals, nice flow from both heads. I felt Roy had an good verse punches was good. Felt you went kinda baisc here fam, bit creative,less punch effect fam. Kor you had an good verse, nice punches,good flow, wordplay was good and the punches was decent, KOR YOU WON THIS BY AN LAND SLIDE,PERIOD. roy i just felt Kor came harder with the punches no hate fam. peace |
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