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Effect 01-17-05 01:17 PM

Fed Up
 
Sometimes I think theres nothing to live for
I'm not sure whats in store whats at my door
Wish I could could block everything and ingore
im sitting here on the floor just madly bored
with nothing to do and I feel so so mad
I don't even get a chance to see my dad
So you've got to understand my circumstances
and that I feel so weak im running outta answers
all I feel is anger that I feel that is building up
im trapped at home n feel like im'a blow this ceiling up
Lifes pure pressure and im'a afraid there is no cure
my opinions are always pure but sometimes not always sure
I'm now living wid a step dad and I just hate him so bad
can't wait until he' dies till that day I will be so glad
cause he treats me like trash n he's just a fuckin bum
i'll shoot his ass with a gun to burry this stupid dum
im not askin for much I just want a little respect
so you can detect a decent person here 4 a sec
But I don't care I really don't feel I have much interest
you seem to enjoy my stress when you feel to test
thats bwhy im standing and In still gonna keep demanding
your not gonna push my buttons im'a keep on landing
you gotta realist im not happy about shit thats happened
thats why I keep rapping to show the world im acting
And I won't stop till I get some hapniness while im alive
im sick of everyone life for ne is really trying to survive
but instead I get bribed and believe me ive really tried
but everyday seems the same I feel like that im tied
fuck I mean my soul has died im always to petrified
ive been lied to know one ever seems to see my true side

Effect 01-17-05 02:37 PM

was anyone feeling that homies......

Optimus 01-17-05 02:44 PM

Improve your vocab, not bad...but it was too simplistic.

Effect 01-17-05 02:46 PM

whats simplictic about it? I had so many multies in that verse so it wasn't simplistic.

Optimus 01-17-05 02:49 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Effect
cause he treats me like trash n he's just a fuckin bum
i'll shoot his ass with a gun to burry this stupid dum
<that explains my previous post, don't like that constructive critism, then battle me.

Effect 01-17-05 02:51 PM

ok you can set the battle up since your so big headed. I don't like it when u don't even make sense my shit was far from basic.

Optimus 01-17-05 02:56 PM

Alright then, 8 line's.....you sure?

Effect 01-18-05 07:28 AM

need more feed on this please...


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