Effect vs .Zer0
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines.
No Crew Votes.
No Recycling.
No Biting.
No Feeding.


Minimum posts to vote: 250

Check in by: 01-17-05 at 03:28 PM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.

.Zer0 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-17-05 03:00 PM.

Effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-17-05 03:04 PM.

This bitch is gonna be dead in seconds check out his shit record
everybody hates you Fucker everyone on rv wishes you wen't born
i'ma leave you riped and torn your just an mc who likes 2 be faker
shit this snitch needs to slit his own wrists he's a male raper!
Get blown off my charts yea im'a have 2 let your pain start
get carted off away and get chains gripped on u and ripped apart
Your just silly for challenging me to battle you can't handle
scared to take banter im giving you a little help and sample

Fuck you

I'll strap alarm clock's to your thigh's to show you a "waist of time".
Cos face the music effect, no one feelin' ya shit like amputee's performin' mime's.
I'll leave effect on the curb like drunken bastard's on vodka shot's..
But effect say's his rhyme's are erect.(str8).how can they when everyone says they a flop?.
Disperse ya wack written's, cos .Zer0'll just ground ya verse into powder..
Effect's skating on thin ice, so i'll just pierce the surface & watch him flounder!
Zer0'll dent ya spirit's like clumsy warehouse worker's handling alcohol.
If effect was a fuckin' detergent, he'd get cancelled out by BOLD.

Done..that in 5 minute's, so w/e...I'll return the favour on honest votes only.

Voted For: .Zer0

ZERO- Alright fam, You had some good effective punches. Still elevate on struture, the flow was messed up in some places. The wordplay of your verse was good, decent fam.



Effect-Flow was chopped up homie. Punches were good, wordplay was good. The closer wasnt that good homie, kinda an newbish closer. Throughout your verse it was good, still elevate homie.




overall=This battle is one-sided in my eyes, Zero had some decent punches and good flow, wordplay was also decent. Effect your punches were good, still elevate homie on wordplay's and using more personals. I have to give this to Zero cause he had harder punches with some hard decent wordplays. Effect your punches was good, but still wasnt that fairly effective to give you the victory.


peace.

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RTF EFFECT AND ZERO

I'M HOPING I DONT EXPECT AN HATE VOTE FROM YOU EFFECT.


PEACE.

Voted For: .Zer0

difficult decision. this is how is broke down.

zero: Your opener was good. I liked it, good use of metaphor and nice vocab. Without doubt the better opener of the two. Closer was ok but his wasnt all that either, i think yours was better. You had a good amount of metaphors in there, hard punches that were clever and mainly hit quite hard. Your lines went on for a little which made it a little more difficult to read than his but still a nice verse, entertaining 7/10

Effect: Your opener was good personal but his was a bit better. You need to make your opener as strong as possible. Closer was ok, with good multis and quite a good punch but it came off a little weaker than the other verse. Some nice punches but his vocab and metaphor use made his verse a little more advanced.

Unlucky Effect, keep doing ya thing

Lets get this closed,. . . . . . . . . upping.

This was feedback posted for .Zer0
 

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Voted For: .Zer0

.voting for ajax...Effect your verse was trash horrible...just dont make sense to be that garbage...Ajax u had attempts at punches but uhm alot of em didnt connect correctly..try n fix that make sure the WHOLE punch makes sense and not just half of it.