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....Gone.... 01-17-05 04:42 PM

a Comeback drop
 
Yea mother fuckah'z.


I’m here to make an comeback…like pac making a new hit from his death
Putting pressure on air…like clog dryer filter, there wont be any air lift
that’s the effect of this comeback drop, like big read make everyone stop
What they’re doing and give them, like split minds, a second thought
About coming against me, have you heard? I went to the science shop (lab)
Now I’m back, better than ever, try to bite my rhymes, I’ll leave you starve
Your elevation process stops here, your engines is down, like an broken car
Like hot Kit Kat candy bars, you’ll get choc lips for tasting the burning desire
Wont spit an lick of flow, cause ya lips be melted. You’ll be screaming like a choir
My punches got thorns, get ya lips split, try to throw an punch at me and I’ll just flit
Kid never underestimate me, like doing divisions, I’ll lower the percentage of ur skill, brick
Kid you was never sick, if I say you was…I was just being sarcastic, your illness is fiction
Like book of myths, you was never knowledgeable , like scientific fiction pages of fake lessons

....Gone.... 01-17-05 04:46 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1901203

....Gone.... 01-17-05 05:26 PM

Uppin For Some Decent Feedbacks Hoe's.................

Black Queen 01-17-05 05:31 PM

wud up pimpin where ya been aint heard from ya n a min but let me leave some feed on yo verse your structure was all dere flow was makin dat combak keep doin ya thang leave feed on my stuff links n sig

....Gone.... 01-17-05 05:39 PM

Alright i'll take a look at them, mean-while girl we need to an callab. wun.

Whyte Ave. 01-17-05 05:45 PM

not a bad a drop...lots of multi's and the vocab and word play was pretty tight..The starting was the best, thought it was going to be an absolute dope piece, but it dropped off a bit. Flow was choppy in a couple parts but other then that was good. Couple metas you had were good. Pretty solid comeback drop.

Check my piece "Floating Soul" out please


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