Os1ris vs Fuck This Life .
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-20-05 at 04:50 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Os1ris has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-17-05 05:51 PM.

Fuck This Life . has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-17-05 06:15 PM.

Thinkin U The Best? U Just Betta Swallow That Shyt
U Couldnt Get A Leg Up On Me At A Sneaker Store Modelin Kicks

My Split Personality Must Yo Reason For Your Strange Behavior
Schema's Resistance Is Pointless Like Kemo-Patients Usin Electric Shavers

I'll Take This Ingrade And Tuck His Ass In Like Gay Pride Attractions
His Status Does Add Up Like Odd Numbers In Fractions!

yea it was pre-written no rules bout that........ohhh well kid drop ya shit...

Os1ris will blaze ya eyelids, u dont got the balls 2 try this/
This fag is quiet, so I'll grab his neck and break tha silence//
Im beatin this guy worse then artest on piston fans/
Id say fuck you but your name already took my plans//
Frantic pleas for mercy use your sigs gun with precision/
You maybe can shake my lyrics but not critical condition//
I wrote this verse to beat you and only to prove my point/
This guy could get arthritis and still never have ill-joints//
I leave this guy ugly lookin like mookie blaylocks offspring/
This guy couldnt spit a clean verse if his name was listerine//
*Done*
This bitch thinks hes hot, but I think I need ta check ya temperature/
"Pre-writtens" seems u suffered from writers block since the day u registered'//
*finisher*
You 'back-down' like casket-viewings fuck this life is always at a dead-loss he lives a suicidal image/
You couldn't stay-livin' tryna grasp-on-abs like alcholoics leave ya 'dead'-center tryna trace-srimmage..

uppin this biatch yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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Voted For: Os1ris

felt os more on this battle it is simple he just came harder but hey homes get rid of the bars iight no hate. But he came harder had harder punches better personels and flow was good lyric was iight opener-closure was better and overall you flowed better.

but no hate just keep elevating and hey hit up on my links peace.

7.5/10

Voted For: Os1ris

this one goes to os1ris for better punches and personals. All the punches weren't hittin to me though so had yours been shorter you probably wouldn't have won but you had so many lines that some were bound to be good. I wasn't feelin the silence line but the you took my plans was good. the critical condition line was pretty weak but the ill joints/arthritis line was good. the mookie blaylock line was decent and the writer's block line was good. The shear length proly took this one for you even though fuck this life's whole verse was good you had more good punches cause yours was longer. Structure was a little off but to me structure doesn't really effect the value of a verse cause i can read anything. I would've liked to see more from fuck this life though cause he could've had you. anyway return the favor.

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Voted For: Os1ris

Voted For Os1ris

Ris got dis due to flow n punches

To be honest in battles to get my vote u gots to have flow and punches thasd all i look for fuck metas n personals n shyt

Ris bes line:
I leave this guy ugly lookin like mookie blaylocks offspring/
This guy couldnt spit a clean verse if his name was listerine//

Fuck ya punches were a lil dim flow was ight but ya jus didnt bring the punches

Voted For: Os1ris

v/os1ris......close battle but i give my vote to os1ris he came harder than fuck this life in everything his punchs were more creative an consistent an he had better vocab.....
punchs=os1ris
vocab=os1ris
structure=os1ris
multis=os1ris
overall=os1ris
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

Voted For: Os1ris

osiris wins ths one. he had punchlines and was able to make them because he didn't do 6 lines. If you only want 6 lines, then do maximum 6 lines......(hint)

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