MaRVJay1009 vs 50hater_killer
 

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^^^^datz how u vote ppl just copy n paste da shit 2 vote...other wise da shit aint gon count

check in fam if u decline dis ur a bitch...reason i set dis up is cuzz u be hatin so lets go

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 01-18-05 at 10:45 PM

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50hater_killer has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-17-05 10:54 PM.

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-17-05 10:59 PM.

Only person I see here tryin to rhyme is you,
for I am not hatin but everyone is hating jew!
I see u have to show how to vote,
for ur ass does not know what a parade uses as a float,
my words might be overplayed,
but I think me and my boys took ur mom who is overplayed,
did I tell you that she enjoys the cock,
witch she told me that she would love to rock!
So I am threw with this shit,
for iam done with u for my lyrics have bit JEW!

reminder he comes from queens of spades
witch from where he gave is slutty girl friend AIDS

look...

dis gon be a easy nun of da bars from dis herb personaL
fam how girls merkin u? matter fact u got koed by girlmerkinu
ya flow aint gon get u shit mines gon get me papah....
i get it now u rap like "Ja-RULE" datz y call ya self "50 hater"
but really quit rap fam cuzz ya shit is gettin me nauses..
nigga ya overall record on dis site is 7 WiNS & 17 LOSSES*
u could hate marv shit...but afta i spray large clipps...
........i dont mean "WORKiN LaTE"
u'll get put in da dirt so fast it'll make da "graveyard-SHiFT"
dont try rap like me...bitch your da only fukkin fag i see
i'll give ya "LiP-TEN" then they'll put u in a "bag like tea"**
u not ruthless just dumb,so whut u be in da booth wit ya gun
u'll only aim in da air like "steve nash" you "shoot 4 da sun"

nuff said.....

first bar...click da link he got killed by a girl name girlmerkinu
third bar..his overrall record is 7-17 cuzz he had another name which was kkk hater

upppin dis shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppppppin dis shit for this pussy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: MaRVJay1009



opener-Marv,Good Personal
structure-50th,Marv Ya Shit Wass Kinda Stretched
punchlines-Marv,Hiss Hit Way Harder
creativity-Marv,Had Some Good Ways Of Makin His Wordplay
multis-Marv Good Shit With Tha Personals
wordplay-Marv Had Decent Wordplay
personals-Marv,Couple Personals
finisher-Marv Good Multies And Punch
enjoyed-Marv,His Wass Good

/V Marvjay1009........................

fuck marv might win this one but his pussy ass is afraid to take on cali jeez I wonder why?? I smell I smell pussy! uppin

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!

upppppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnn!!!!!! !

This was feedback posted for 50hater_killer
 

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upppppppppppppppppppppin fur some votes up in here!!!

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

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I ain't gon' vote with that, because you tell me to.
Too bad, Marvjay did some good personals, however some parts I didn't understand. 50Hater had some good things, but too bad that part about the cock and the mother was a bit unoriginal. You can do way better