Metaskriptz vs WerdSmith
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines...
No Crew Votes....
No Recycling...
No Biting...
No Feeding...
No Dickriding...

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 01-18-05 at 03:47 PM

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WerdSmith has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-18-05 03:18 PM.

Metaskriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-18-05 03:24 PM.

Man that sucked...btw the last line you won't get, cos he said in my callout that it'll be "No problem at all" to merk me.

Aight Check It

My Crusialnist Is Now InTacked, Plus Your Flows Is Wack and Creativity you Lack
I threw so many hard punches I made you lean Back farther then Petey Crack
WerdSmith, about to get ripped just like Lil Flip, to call me Out real quik
Mainly You about to recieve hard Punches, So I guess you can say you was Born with a Fat Lip
Can't denie The Truth Can't Try to fake It, Even Re-awake it, As I Even If Faggot Niggas Make it
You Aint hard as My Dick was when I seen your Momma Naked
8 Lines is your Limit as I can see, Its Time to pay your fee, For Fake G's
So When you Turn Back around the only thing you see is the door Closing Right Behind Me,

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Voted For: Metaskriptz

My Crusialnist Is Now InTacked, Plus Your Flows Is Wack and Creativity you Lack
I threw so many hard punches I made you lean Back farther then Petey Crack
nice multi’s here…kinda weak punch here, but decent closer
WerdSmith, about to get ripped just like Lil Flip, to call me Out real quik
Mainly You about to recieve hard Punches, So I guess you can say you was Born with a Fat Lip
decent punch, nice multi’s
Can't denie The Truth Can't Try to fake It, Even Re-awake it, As I Even If Faggot Niggas Make it
You Aint hard as My Dick was when I seen your Momma Naked
good punch here…once again u had decent multi’s in this punch
8 Lines is your Limit as I can see, Its Time to pay your fee, For Fake G's
So When you Turn Back around the only thing you see is the door Closing Right Behind Me,
good closer

Overall…u had multi’s up the ass like whoa though, but that’s good
made your drop more complexed, and hard hittin punches thru it all overall
I give you a 7/10

Wedge a math book in ya pupil, so you can literally watch the nine.
I asked him if he fucked a bitch & he got excited thinkin' of a canine!
decent closer, kind of a weak punch though
Ya script's are like unwanted receipt's, they just easily discarded.
...Sniff sniff, Meta's script's wreak of garbage, and i ain't saying he farted.
decent multi’s…weak punch though
Ya retarded, he try's to please by relentlessly poloshing up his \masters-piece/
Attracted maggot's to his comp upon dropping his
verse, obviously they thought it was a feast!
good punch here…get rid of the \’s though
I don't need a closer, cos your verse basically just self destructed.
And to add to ya rec this battle was another "No problem @ all" deducted!.
…like you said…I would’ve never-gotten that punchline…

Overall…u had a decent drop, punches were kinda weak though, you should
work on that some more, one of your lines had a decent multi’s up in it…but overall
I give you a 6.5/10

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