Mobster (grade A Flame!)
 

I HAVENT POSTED on this site in a minute, mainly because i havent uploaded any of my new shit since the jump off, but ive been keepin busy, i got quite a few tracks to upload from my new list. they some hot ones. this is a verse off a track for the mixtape, i love this beat, and these lyrics, listen closely n catch all the punchlines because theres at least one in everyline, but they can go over your head if you dont pay attention. this tracks gonna feature 20 grand n were still lookin for somebody to fill in the other veres. so if you can hang get at me. peep it up n leave some feed. thanx :thumbup:

mobster

beats ok a lil repetitive...delivery needs alot of work noth enough emotion..flow is choppy work on making it smoother punch lines r excellent but dont mess up ya flow homie...needs more similies better flow more word play better multis and metas too

eh... wasn't really feelin' beat. Quality wasn't that good. Yo lyrics were good. Nice multi's. Yo flow was aiight, could be upped a lil tho. Lyrics were aiight, you could prolly make them better tho. Jus up yo emotion a lil and you'll be aiight. 7/10 pc

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This Was Coo..Flow was iite..Lyrics Ok..Delivery coo..Needs Work Tho..the Quality Needs Work Too homie..Keep Droppin..E z..

blaow! quality upped. got my mans 20 to eq it and he spit his verse to it. should be uploaded by a few mins its uploadin to sc now. much, much better quality, im tellin ya, 20 is a miracle worker. still need 2 mc's to fill in the other verses and 1 mc to spit a chorus. if you have skill peep this out pleez this could b quite mixtape worthy. lets make it come together homies. pz
thanx alot for the feed nikkahz~