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Scareface 01-18-05 06:54 PM

It Was ......*A Tribute*
 
It Was

It was the struggle of Blacks That Pave The way.
It was how they Stood Strong Everyday.
It was how the Soldiers Died for Our Country.
It was how We Stay Caged but Claim Liberty.
It was how The mothers Stood for their rights
It Was how the minute men Stood In The fight.
It was How the blacks stood Through the Segregation.
It is why crime s the Main Pain to our nation.
It is how we choose To Live.
It was how The determined People who paved the way for me.
It is why i Apreciate being Free.

By: Daydren Davis

BKA

King~~Dipset

peace .

Scareface 01-18-05 06:55 PM

Im Uppin for some feed I Know its short But Its Really Got alot of meaning to it bcuz i won the Martin Luther King Jr. contest in my town wit this poem so I thought yall needed to read it

Uppin

Scareface 01-19-05 08:32 PM

cMON yALL IM UPPIN

Please drop me some kinda feed

Dabatos 01-19-05 08:37 PM

Very short, and has simple vocab, but the meaning is very good... I liked the last line, that one line made all the other lines before it show even more meaning to what your trying to say.. much props pc..

8/10

*plz leave feed back to my Poem Need Courage *

Blackmage 01-31-05 07:17 PM

It was.... pretty good dog pretty good, naw i'm frontin it's raw dog a little short but other than that i think you stratight. anyway check out diamond in the sky, my poem, and stay up.


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