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Darkness Of Life
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1904933
shades of darkness now embedded in my brain the precipation of the rain,is smybolizing pain accomidating chains,of deppresive inflictions progessive inscisions,with their opressive intentions excessive conditions,still could not endure this the heats evolving torrid,the pains evolving horrid lurin,me into the harsh reality of the end of time darkness is alive,and theres no light switch to find ya visions blind,realitys frightening and hard to face ya heart'll race,when u ponder death so u start to pace hardly dazed,but drunk off my ass without consumption my assumption,is havin these thoughts was just too much shit no time for resumption,cuz forgiveness is forbidden horrendousest of visions,in my head..hittin it relentless its sicknin and its visious,when u have to face the facts cant make it back,if i could have 1 wish i'd erase the past |
Good drop, maybe bit short but it's nice...Vocab was impressive, had dope multis in there which definately improved your flow. Structure was good and emotion was raw. Topic was cool too, was easy to relate to for everyone I think.
Good job girl, keep on holding it down for the ladies! DQ |
short n sweet. tight as hell and deep at tha same time.......damn is there even any need for you to drop? i mean it's gonna be fire regardless of what it is. lol my favorite part was
ya visions blind,realitys frightening and hard to face ya heart'll race,when u ponder death so u start to pace hardly dazed,but drunk off my ass without consumption my assumption,is havin these thoughts was just too much shit no time for resumption,cuz forgiveness is forbidden horrendousest of visions,in my head..hittin it relentless overall i give this piece a 9/10 cuz i dont give 10's no more but keep doin wut u do shawdy n return tha favor. 1. |
thx fo da feed.
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upppin fo feed.
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definately nice one there.
Keepin up to your usual standard of greatness. Great vocab, deep lyrics, I was feeling ya verse while reading it. I liked this line for some reason: lurin,me into the harsh reality of the end of time darkness is alive,and theres no light switch to find Keep it up girly, your on top of the femcees in my mind |
thx fo feed.....
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Weerd...short and sweet...Good drop ma...nice vocab and imagery...good shit...1
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thx............
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that shit was dope as fuck too. For real this shit is tight as hell. :thumbup:
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short shit but it was good. Nice vocab and i was feelin the content. I was a little thrown off because i would be reading a line with multi's and try to predict the next line and it wouldn't be it so creative use of vocab. Nice drop.
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str8 dopeness ma u held it down 4 "GRAND HUSTLAZ" i like it overall quality was hot keep up the good work
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