Hells Fire vs Nemesis
 

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No Crew Votes
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3 votes in row = knock out
5 votes wins

Minimum posts to vote: 20

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Nemesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-19-05 08:32 PM.

Hells Fire has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-19-05 08:32 PM.

Nemesis deformed game like resident evil
soriasis outbreak give the brain an advil
Your names chock on dick backwards is "sea men"
only nok out you got was someone elses sign when
you felt your moms up n found out she broke yo "high-men"
get your enemies straight, its me and my skin is bright white
if you lose this fight, put ur homo colors on n flight like kite
because after the strights pulled from your ass...boom g-night
get it right nemesis wins zero,n hells fire reaps all,even hero
dead eatin by fishes in the river of styx and havin no hits, like dorio-goto Bitch...

there ya go kinda weak havent battled in forever but it'll do

typo edited it
 

Nemesis deformed game like resident evil
soriasis outbreak give the brain an advil
Your names chock on dick backwards is "sea men"
only nok out you got was someone elses sign when
you felt your moms up n found out she broke yo "high-men"
get your enemies straight, its me and my skin is bright white
if you lose this fight, put ur homo colors on n flight like kite
because after the strings pulled from your ass...boom g-night
get it right nemesis wins zero,n hells fire reaps all,even hero
dead eatin by fishes in the river of styx and havin no hits, like dorio-goto Bitch...

look at You claimin that your name is hells fire
u a liar cant do shit if satin gave u himself a safire
DBZ is for pussies I guess dats y its in ur Sig
Cuz ill murder u son like fat ripped from a pig
Your lines are stretched like ya loss record will be
hittin u wit punches is easy have u cleanin 9/11 debris
the crew u in is originally named Emericas fines Ho's
U merkin me? still CANT do shit if ur name was flows
Man u battle worse the dat pussy Bomber-Z
Ill have ya ass scared runnin like a Marquee

uppppppppin this ppl please honest votes no hate votes or nothing ok plz thx. :thumbup:

Uppin this ok people plz no hate votes or dickriding votes ok plz thx. :thumbup:

Uppin this people ok plz no hate votes or dick riding votes ok thx. :thumbup:

ok ppl were uppin this ok plz no more sleepin on this one ok so honest votes aight thx. :thumbup:

Voted For: Nemesis


Nemesis
Alright You Elivated Alot Man, Some Deceont Vocabulary In Your Verse I Was Feeling, You Had Some Good Personals Here,
Like The Bomber Z Closer Nice Use Of His Name, Opener Was Alright Not To Great But Decent, Rhyme Scheme Needs A Little Work But Other Then That Your Good....8/10

Hells Fire
Vocabulary Was Plain And Basic, Punches Wasn't To Great Just An Newbie Verse, You Need Help On Alot Of Ish Check Out The Tutorials

Vote-Nem

Voted For: Nemesis

wow both of these flows was str8 grabage...but sum1 gotta win...n dats nemesis....return da favor mayn

coo thx ppl for the votes ok we still uppin this ppl ok. plz no hate votes or D/R votes. :thumbup:

Voted For: Nemesis

as much as i hat to vote for Nem on this i have too cause the kid just came harder.... here is my break down

Nem- you show a little elevation from previous battles on the site, you used pretty good rhyme scheme in this... flow was good and consistant, structure was good and not to stretched out... punches and personals were suprisingly pretty good overall. lmao i liked the bomber-z line cause i know hes wack and it was just a funny way to throw a punch... vocab could use a little help but u used some good ones as well. overall this is pobably one of your best battles that ive seen any way... 6.5/10

Hells- you lost this from the opener on dawg, no hate at all but this is how i see it... first of all evil and advil do not rhyme, say it outloud does it sound close? its spelled close yes but it dosent sound the same... your structure was ok but could have been more consistant, it was a little stretched in places and that hurt the overall flow of your drop... punches and personals were not all that wonderful, they were kinda weak but one or 2 hit kinda hard... overall vocab needs improvment.. no hate at all bro, just elevate and you will get there... i give your drop an overall 3/10

ok so that is the way this one comes down... nem you are elevating as much as i hate to admit it... and hells you will elevate too just keep it up and dont give up cause you will get there too, just a matter of time.... so good battle by the both of you on this one.

VOTE- NEM