SQUAD-UP vs InTeGrA
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 11 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-25-05 at 08:02 AM

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InTeGrA has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-20-05 08:02 AM.

SQUAD-UP has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-20-05 11:08 AM.

Yo aight listen
You got a faggot name representin yo "squad"
Dawg your reputation is square, like your pink "ipod"
Somebody look at the size of his nose, it looks like zeus's lightning "rod"
All you doin when u hearin my rhymes is "nod" lookin mad "homo"
Instead of rappin dawg, go back to singin "bolo polo"
You can't roll "solo", cause you rely off yo city's cheapest ghost "writer"
Bench pressin only 26 pounds? Homie your the cheapest "fighter" who got it twisted from "coast to coast"
with that drop you only pump up this thread's "freepost"
Someone look at his face! He got scars lookin like the burns on pieces of "burnt toast"
You thinkin your trill, but yo watch lookin like the size of cartoon "space pods"
This aint for you, go back to beatin yo self on Bin Laden's terrorist "squads"

SQAAAAAAAAAUUUD UP!!!


check me out..

ya winning percentage is somewhere below the zero zone
homes, ya life is on the line, like its Neo's phone
ya verse is pretty poor, give u a D on prose
and u aint no Integra, look more like a Geo homes
u must b left handed, cuz dog u aint comin right
n the wit on ya punches is as sharp as a butter knife
u b singin a sad song, u win? you mad wrong
u not a ruff ryda, but ya bars kinda "drag- on"
im in tip top shape, u just a hip- hop fake
stop perpatratin, u tryin my patience
only time this nigga got "laid" was a Hawaian vacation
.......EASSSY

ight integra uppin for votes holla at me wit honest votes 1

Voted For: SQUAD-UP

nice job man that was nice you won with better structure better hits better rhymes you made sense and i liked it dawg yo return tha favour on my battles homie

yeah I didnt try against him though. I could spit better than that

Voted For: InTeGrA

SQUAD-UP:opener was good but the ending was weak.Vocab was okay,structure n flow were cool.Had some good punches in there, quite creative with good wordplay but nothing really hardhitting though.

ya verse is pretty poor, give u a D on prose
and u aint no Integra, look more like a Geo homes
u must b left handed, cuz dog u aint comin right
n the wit on ya punches is as sharp as a butter knife
^best lines

InTeGrA: stayed consistent throughout entire battle in fact, had bold punches and personals, good multis here and there which improved your flow. Vocab was better to, nice wordplay. Structure was decent.

Dawg your reputation is square, like your pink "ipod"
Somebody look at the size of his nose, it looks like zeus's lightning "rod"
^liked em...

Good job from both of you but I go with Integra on this one...no hate and return the favor please...

okay 1/1 upping for more votes, upping till someone hits 5 votes.

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Voted For: SQUAD-UP

V/squad up ......this was an ight battle but squad up came stronger than integra....he had sum good lines his verse went right to the point...integra i felt u juss kept dragin on ur diss's an they were really that orginal....
punchs=squad up
structure=squad up
vocab=squad up
multi's=(none really)
overall=squad up
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

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Voted For: SQUAD-UP

Winna:squad-up

squad up:
like your delivery on the personals, especially:"ya winning percentage is somewhere below the zero zone
homes, ya life is on the line, like its Neo's phone". funny and true, good puns throughout, not scared to throw a lyrical swipelike the vacation line. not a lot wrong with your verse except, i would've made it longer, solid shit tho.
8.5/10 nice

Integra:
i feel you have the potential to win but i think you focused a bit too much on rhming and not enough on the size of your bars:"Someone look at his face! He got scars lookin like the burns on pieces of "burnt toast" was one of the worst offenders. but you had some good lines like: "You got a faggot name representin yo "squad"
Dawg your reputation is square, like your pink "ipod"" but then u went on that tangent about zeus's rod, which didnt help u out. think more abot your structure,try reading your lines out or something
ima give u a 6.5/10 ellevate and u could be a LOT better than this. keep it up

arch out