Guv`nor vs Da King
 

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Guv`nor has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-20-05 01:46 PM.

Da King has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-20-05 01:46 PM.

This bitch dont wanna battle, cuz he aint hood, he comin from London
Im insane, like Huissein, cuz I keep on bombin
Stopmin' down doors, yo, this bitch don't move me
Cuz his raps sound like they belong in a Disney movie
This cat is trash, watch me axe this fag
bomb this ho, and stop his flow, like maxi-pads
Get stuck in the dirt, watch this motherfucker get murked
Why his breath stink so bad, his teeth gotta duck when he burp??

All that in 6 minutes so nothing too special...but I bet you I'll rip this kids fuckin ass apart!!!!

Pm`d me to bring my a-game, but that ain't really needed.
Cos with a wack name, equivilent bar's will have you easily defeated.

I'll de-throne this king, and demote him to my personal jester.
I mean your`e so garbage, even cockroache`s wouldn`t infest-ya.

Shove the gat to ya palm, and pop off...so you`ll be literally `handy-capped`.
Hip-Hop popularity plummeted, the day Da King attempted to rap!

You gettin` the win`ll shock me, like steppin` in the shower with a toaster.
But the difference is Da King lack`s flow, like cups`a water on coaster`s!

Ok, i didn`t do too well..but i took a while off lol..g`luck DK.
Btw you should think about my punch`s, if you don`t get em`. If you still don`t then don`t bother votin`.

Voted For: Guv`nor

Da king took this easily...better punches, flow, and structure...Guv, you shoulda brought ya a-game man...u suck...sry...No personals in either verse, but as far as punches, multies, wordplay, and metas go, Da King took the crown...1

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This was feedback posted for Guv`nor
 

checking polls.................

wack battle -_-

Voted For: Da King

Votin for Da King

King got dis strictly for the punches

My Fav Line:
This cat is trash, watch me axe this fag
bomb this ho, and stop his flow, like maxi-pads
(damn right to the face wit dat one)

Flow was tie
Structure both a lil off but tie
personals really didnt see any

it was all about the punches in this one n King gets my vote for his punches

This site is ass, i mean there's herb vote's left, right and center...a fuckin` cheating cunt and a herb that voted for a wack verse..!

Voted For: Guv`nor

Man yall suck. I am gunna go with guv though because I generally enjoyed it more, but that is not to say i enjoyed it. DK you gotta do way better than that. Guv, you too. Read some tutorials and shit. Guv stop putting spaces b/w bars, DK try dissing more and throwing personals for a more effective diss. Anyways

v-guv

Voted For: Guv`nor

guv gets my vote on dis one.....he had consisten punches thru-out....he had creativity thrown in there...
da king..ur opener didnt even rhyme...you had some punches but they were too basic..you had a decent structure tho...not many multies from either of you.....nice battle but my vote goes to
guv....return da favor yo 4-real
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...935162&posted=1

Voted For: Guv`nor

^^Took this for sure:

Da King: Ok verse. You operner was weak, i didnt know london and bombin rhymed. and the self-glorification in a battle is a big no-no!
Closer was better but still alacked any real quality,m couple of multis but no rela metaphor and a weak punch.
Your punches on the whole were not very good. No metaphors, or wordplay but a few multis. Mainly the verse was "infant" but you can definately get better.

Guv'nor: nice drop. opener was nice, good punch with a personal touch, nice way to start it.
Closer was the tits! got him with two metaphors and a nice punch.
You had some real good lines in there, i liked the jester one. top marks. Good metaphors, hard hitting punches that deinately hit the targets. Overall much better than your opponants

This was feedback posted for Guv`nor
 

.................................................. ...............you serious?

thanks for all the criticism i battle at my school but it aint really no comp. i do call myself da king though because i been to alot of places and ain't nobody beat fo' real. this site is wut i need to improve my skills