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Freestyle Drill
Just a freestyle I made one day at school
Ayo... I practically see more legs, on plate with 3 chickens Start to fuck with me, and you'll teeth will be missing I come up, and you might say Skriptz is a damn grouch Move bitch and, lay down like a fat man on a black couch You can't touch this nigga, cause my flow is so complex Don't bother to come haters, cause after that it comes plex I'm like the color blue mayn, cause you know I’m royal Put your cheeks near the lava, so I can make the boil I stay with 2 cheeks, but they have no damn feel or firm Practically get hoes like two fags, with a handle on a low turn Look kids, don't act tough around me, just because I'm black Throw your punches up in the air, and get them slapped by Shaq I’ll chew off the hater’s list, so I ruff ryde like Jadakiss Everyone be coming up to me and saying, “How we get rich?” I practically stay on the streets, you hobos stay in boxes Putting Reebok’s on your feet, so you’ll know how to rock it I stay true to myself, to my family, and always to the game People playing on the streets or spray painting their name I’m not the one to be hating, because of course, I’m just being me People on VH1 be saying, that the all-time hater is that nigga Ice T Your crib be having more spots, than Dalmatians and polka dots Bet you tried to handcuff your girl, came home to broke locks I aint the type of nigga to be brag about the size of my dick I’d rather brag about something else like the size of my chips You can’t beat me you fags, so go ahead and cry & whine I spit fire every time so you can, hit stop and press rewind nuttin much though...was bored during History Class http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1907464 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1907477 |
shit was straight, flowed perfectly together, nice structure, great topic. thanx for the feed man just hittin you back...
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no problem....
uppin this..i guess |
yea I agree it flowed pretty good had some good rhyminh and vocab was good also keep it up.
6.8/10 check out my open mics and other links peace! |
i liked this alot...good free good vocabulary and it was good creativty with sinilies and metaphores very good liked this alot it was like hmm hmm some lines but most of them were there i liked alot of the shit you had there my fav lines are prob...
I'm like the color blue mayn, cause you know I’m royal Put your cheeks near the lava, so I can make the boil You can’t beat me you fags, so go ahead and cry & whine I spit fire every time so you can, hit stop and press rewind ^^there alright....but for a free this was good...keep up homie... check my new OM...Until The End...links in the sig... |
heh thanks...
up this shit then |
get to uppin now...
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