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Legend vs Indeph
Battle Rules:
10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting G'Luck. Da Vinci view and if I win I'm in. I hope. Or if I'm close to winning.:D Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-23-05 at 08:42 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-20-05 08:45 PM.
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Perfectly crafted my lyrics are composed with no flaws Words create disaster, while you spit weak like cats with broke jaws Crews by the whole fall, against one like me, all ya hopes lost Only way you'd drop something hard is if your penis broke off I murder by the masses, creating nothing less than a classic Cause you couldn’t control a flow if you directed traffic Like cats who sip scolding tea too quick, I bring forth hot spits And your verses steel wouldnt be hot if you were a fuckin locksmith Now we all know who sucks and who is the very best Cause you couldnt kick two nice rounds if you played soccer with breast |
Indeph has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-21-05 02:10 PM.
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I'ma flip for the win..I'ma ahead,and yet you order quators(his 50 sig)
cause if you from our hearts..then I wanna organ donor TC keep you waiting..And you getting old for the entry how is this artist a legend,but get no's from Da vinci you would think after all this,you'd bare the messege.. you'll jus get boot from crews,like where your leg End..(legend) check the nigga Bio..look at the hoe he praise.. Katrina?..every nigga who had sex,knows that name.. yeah marraige needs agreements..so think do she like you.. I asked if she would marry legend,and she was like who? Good Luck Fam.. |
Voted For: Legend
Legend Perfectly crafted my lyrics are composed with no flaws Words create disaster, while you spit weak like cats with broke jaws hahaha..Aight 9/10 Crews by the whole fall, against one like me, all ya hopes lost Only way you'd drop something hard is if your penis broke off I Like It...LOL Its Decent 8/10 I murder by the masses, creating nothing less than a classic Cause you couldn’t control a flow if you directed traffic First Line Decent.. Second Decent 7/10 Like cats who sip scolding tea too quick, I bring forth hot spits And your verses steel wouldnt be hot if you were a fuckin locksmith Not To Decent...Nice Creativity and I see where you was trying to go with it 5/10 Now we all know who sucks and who is the very best Cause you couldnt kick two nice rounds if you played soccer with breast Funny..I understand but kindof din't make Since..7/10 Your Lines was Dope..You probably have had the best lines I ever seen on here.. Good Drop but you didnt have no Personals which makes it drop and No multies...But Structure was decent and Nice Overall Drop 9/10 Indeph I'ma flip for the win..I'ma ahead,and yet you order quators(his 50 sig) cause if you from our hearts..then I wanna organ donor Ok I suppose..Didnt Really hit Though 6/10 TC keep you waiting..And you getting old for the entry how is this artist a legend,but get no's from Da vinci [/b]kindof alright..I like it 7/10p[/b] you would think after all this,you'd bare the messege.. you'll jus get boot from crews,like where your leg End..(legend) Pretty good...For being Creative 7/10 check the nigga Bio..look at the hoe he praise.. Katrina?..every nigga who had sex,knows that name.. Hmm DOn't Know about this one.. yeah marraige needs agreements..so think do she like you.. I asked if she would marry legend,and she was like who? Pretty Good..I suppose 6/10 You had nice good Personals like whoa and you still had a decent drop. Good flow and Structure and Made things clear and I know where you was comming from with the Creativity. But Legends Verse Did come Harder though. That doesnt mean hes better then you. Your still DOpe Fam 7/10 v/ Legend |
Voted For: Indeph
Indephs Verse I'ma flip for the win..I'ma ahead,and yet you order quators(his 50 sig) cause if you from our hearts..then I wanna organ donor wasnt really feelin this one TC keep you waiting..And you getting old for the entry how is this artist a legend,but get no's from Da vinci lol...good one you would think after all this,you'd bare the messege.. you'll jus get boot from crews,like where your leg End..(legend) pretty good... check the nigga Bio..look at the hoe he praise.. Katrina?..every nigga who had sex,knows that name.. lol nice... yeah marraige needs agreements..so think do she like you.. I asked if she would marry legend,and she was like who? lmfao...probably favorite bar Legends Verse Perfectly crafted my lyrics are composed with no flaws Words create disaster, while you spit weak like cats with broke jaws doesnt make sense...so that basically means cats spit hard when their jaws arent broke?huh?... Crews by the whole fall, against one like me, all ya hopes lost Only way you'd drop something hard is if your penis broke off lol ok better I murder by the masses, creating nothing less than a classic Cause you couldn’t control a flow if you directed traffic ehh...ok Like cats who sip scolding tea too quick, I bring forth hot spits And your verses steel wouldnt be hot if you were a fuckin locksmith kinda weak but ok... Now we all know who sucks and who is the very best Cause you couldnt kick two nice rounds if you played soccer with breast wasnt a very good closer imo... to legend i liked the 2nd bar the most here overall it was an ..ok verse not good enough for the win in my opinion though no hate and indeph an overall good verse had some lines that were ok and some were great good luck to both no hate peace |
Voted For: Indeph
Perfectly crafted my lyrics are composed with no flaws Words create disaster, while you spit weak like cats with broke jaws ^^weak punch and self glorification = wack Crews by the whole fall, against one like me, all ya hopes lost Only way you'd drop something hard is if your penis broke off ^^okay punch...lil humor I murder by the masses, creating nothing less than a classic Cause you couldn’t control a flow if you directed traffic ^^again self glirification=wack decent punch Like cats who sip scolding tea too quick, I bring forth hot spits And your verses steel wouldnt be hot if you were a fuckin locksmith ^^wack punch and again self glorification=wack Now we all know who sucks and who is the very best Cause you couldnt kick two nice rounds if you played soccer with breast ^^again self glorification=wackkkk...weak punch basically your verse was weak....really dont see why u battled a vet........your verse had more self glorification than it did punches........you need to add personals to have a better verse........work on that.......if your lines werent centered your structure would be off.....you flow was good........but your punches were lacking.....try to direct them more to your opponent I'ma flip for the win..I'ma ahead,and yet you order quators(his 50 sig) cause if you from our hearts..then I wanna organ donor ^^didnt rhyme at the end...but nice personal/punch TC keep you waiting..And you getting old for the entry how is this artist a legend,but get no's from Da vinci ^^nice personal again.... you would think after all this,you'd bare the messege.. you'll jus get boot from crews,like where your leg End..(legend) ^^seemed forced....decent punch check the nigga Bio..look at the hoe he praise.. Katrina?..every nigga who had sex,knows that name.. ^^nice personal/punch yeah marraige needs agreements..so think do she like you.. I asked if she would marry legend,and she was like who? ^^nice punch..... aight you came with a pretty solid drop..........definately had way better punches because you directed them towards him more.........you fit the punches with all the personals you used......had some creative personals..........structure was a lil off but could use some work.........and you didnt self glorify :thumbup: |
Voted For: Legend
have to give this one to this boy right here his lines where good he had good flow good strcuture and his rhyming was ok but this battle was a lil hard to vote on but it was iight. you came harder in punches and opener-closure was good and personels where ok so overall I give ya a 7.7/10 and hey hit up on my linkd peace. this is what got my vote out of the whole battle Crews by the whole fall, against one like me, all ya hopes lost Only way you'd drop something hard is if your penis broke off I murder by the masses, creating nothing less than a classic Cause you couldn’t control a flow if you directed traffic Like cats who sip scolding tea too quick, I bring forth hot spits And your verses steel wouldnt be hot if you were a fuckin locksmith |
Voted For: Indeph
Obvioulsy Indeph Won Cus He Had More Personals And Better Punches. Openor=Indeph,He Wasn't Self Glorafyin,Had A Decent Punch And Personal Strukture=Legend,Lol Tha Different Color Thing Wass Ill Personals=Indeph,More Personals And They Wass Decent Punches=Umm Imma Say Indeph,Cus His Punches Hit A Lil Harder Than Legends Vokab=None Wordplay=Indeph Better Wordplay Closer=None,Indeph Ya Closer Wass Weak And Legend Ya Shit Wass Tired As Hell.. Overall Indeph Got This Kid Had Harder Punches And Personals..Fix Ya Strukture And Up Ya Vokab.... /V Indeph................... |
Yo nice honest votes. No herbs. ok. Now Uppyn. Glad and surprised I got some votes. :D
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Uppyn. Too Hot To Be Slept On Shit. Fuckyn Sluts..
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This was feedback posted for Legend
good battle right here.
you both came strong, but i say deph took this. |
Yo why don't ya'll vote in my other battles. Dayum. They getting slept on all mad.
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Voted For: Indeph
Perfectly crafted my lyrics are composed with no flaws Words create disaster, while you spit weak like cats with broke jaws um..weak here, punch didn’t really land here Crews by the whole fall, against one like me, all ya hopes lost Only way you'd drop something hard is if your penis broke off 2nd line just sound gay there I murder by the masses, creating nothing less than a classic Cause you couldn’t control a flow if you directed traffic decent multi’s here…an okay punch Like cats who sip scolding tea too quick, I bring forth hot spits And your verses steel wouldnt be hot if you were a fuckin locksmith weak punch…didn’t reall connected on here Now we all know who sucks and who is the very best Cause you couldnt kick two nice rounds if you played soccer with breast with breast? Wtf…no closer wasn’t good overall you had decent multi’s up in there, punches weren’t really connecting on that one, especially the last line, but overall u had the flow, vocab and structure, just that the punches weren’t reall there thoug…no hate I'ma flip for the win..I'ma ahead,and yet you order quators(his 50 sig) cause if you from our hearts..then I wanna organ donor decent opener…punch line kinda landed here TC keep you waiting..And you getting old for the entry how is this artist a legend,but get no's from Da vinci nah, kinda weak punch were, wasn’t feeling it you would think after all this,you'd bare the messege.. you'll jus get boot from crews,like where your leg End..(legend) good punch, nice persona on here too… check the nigga Bio..look at the hoe he praise.. Katrina?..every nigga who had sex,knows that name.. good persona here, decent punch, kinda connected though yeah marraige needs agreements..so think do she like you.. I asked if she would marry legend,and she was like who? closer was kinda weak here, but it was aight overall you had some nice persona’s up in there, the punches, well some of them were on point, and some were weak here, you had the flow, which was good, the vocab was okay except for some parts and the structure was aight, overall you took this 1 in my opinion though, punches came harder than Legend’s to me it did though rtf Indeph http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=173278 |
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