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ViSiOnZz 07-18-02 02:31 PM

What i'm about.....
 
i'm a example of a tru emcee/
I spit heat so I burn tha mic 3rd degree/
I direct my spits in tha mic so call me "spike lee"/
1st 16 yr ol rapper an a vetran emcee/
verbally murdered emceez i built there graves an r.i.p/
homocide is all thats left for me/
to be murdered where i was born"in streetz"/
basicly im a geek tha way i spit knowlegde to my peepz/
half tha niggaz that think they hard are fake like greek god beliefz/
adreniline is hate in my body/
once it start'z it's 100% grade A beef/
I can't stop hatin fake niggaz until i turn ova a new leaf/
until then i'm gonna keep bustin bullets an runnin these streetz/

Johnny 6-feet 07-18-02 03:51 PM

you got the multis locked down for the end of the bars and you had a couple of really tight lines around the middle of this piece.

maybe up the vocab some you'd be pretty tight.

ViSiOnZz 07-18-02 05:25 PM

thx uppin...

ViSiOnZz 07-22-02 02:14 PM

uppin....

ViSiOnZz 07-22-02 02:55 PM

uppin where feedback at??????????

ViSiOnZz 07-23-02 08:33 AM

dam uppin reply's dam...this lat uppin


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