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shadow vs MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
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10-Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting topical= False hopes G-luck Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 01-20-05 at 11:21 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
shadow has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-20-05 11:08 PM.
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MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-20-05 11:10 PM.
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lied to or let down..soemtimes i dont kno whats worse.. blind-sided by false excitment the truth really hurts.... hoping for things that never come why should i even try?.. reality is a drop of blood in god's fate that makes u cry. thought my hopes and dreams were coming..a reason 4 life.. false hopes led to false dreams that made me turn 2 the knife... with out dreams and reality mixing we all start to mope... whats worse living life tragically or recieving false hope... lost between fairy tale and reality heavens meanings are a blurr.. ...... dreams were broken like porcalain and murals of glass...... .....broken fractured..my world is stirred.... |
I putted an note in your locker, saying I was your secret admire I’d emit all my feelings to you in that letter ,also added an flower Your man doesn’t appreciates you, he don’t give you what you desire He treated you like an puppet under his strings, it was like love for hire Seeing you in the beautiful dress, god, You was like an rare diamond Seeing you standing there where I arrange a meeting for you to see my body Your eyes looking at the beautiful sighting, then appeared another human You smiled at him, thinking he did this for you, my anger went to fumes You kissed him. I ran down the road, my tears weeping, with an lost soul I was hoping me and you can be together, all this time it was just an false hope |
Uppin Nikkah'z..........................................
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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
dam mista u have came a long way in ur topicals homes I think u won this one becuase I felt ur emotion more and ur flow was a tie both of u had a nice flow but I flet mistas emotions more and as if this has happened to him before his worplay was ok his imagry was good and vocab was iight. But overall u got a 7/10 I putted an note in your locker, saying I was your secret admire I’d emit all my feelings to you in that letter ,also added an flower Your man doesn’t appreciates you, he don’t give you what you desire He treated you like an puppet under his strings, it was like love for hire Seeing you in the beautiful dress, god, You was like an rare diamond some good shit keep it up and hey hit up on my links peace |
Cool, uppin for some more votes. Holla at cha boi.
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Voted For: shadow
mista: shit was nice. Had mad feelin n plot. Some shit most cats can relate to. lines were a liiittle stretched... but still cool. vocabulary could have been used better. But other than that nice verse. structure was good. shadow: vocab was better than mistas. A more general way to approach the topic, but it was done in a nice emotional tone. I was kinda feelin this more for some reason. Just seemed a little more polished and professional. |
W/e uppin for some more votes holla at cha boi.........
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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
shadow: man no hate but i think you didnt try here iv eseen so much better from you...you didnt have any good vocab here it lacked creativty a bit there was a few good emtaphores but nothign so creative you know i jsut felt it lacke dthat..but you did have a good stucutre and flow thats good...no hate man Mista_authentiq that was pretty good man you elevated alot your vocab was alot bettter then shadows and your stucture and flow is alot better now..the creativty and metas were there seen alot of imagery there was very good verse from you i shoulda been looking alot mroe cause your gettin better...damn good job... opener: Mista closer: shadow metas: Mista Imagery: Mista flow: Shadow stucture: shadow creativty: Mista win/ Mista |
O thanks homie.........uppin for some votes holla at cha boi.................
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Uppin For Some Votes C'mon Uppin...................
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Uppin For Some Damn Votes.............shit............
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