"Fuck Your Mistreatment"
 

Soundclick in sig...peep it...

Links...

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1908082
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1908087

make ur echo volume a lil lower, beat was ok not much to it
flow was a lil choppy, lyrics were ight
it was kinda boring but only cuz the beat was like slow and stuff
holla back
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this was pretty good. lol. pretty hardcore. the beat was fitting i didnt find it boring i dont mind this style aye bro. nice shit. u kinda like slim shady. rtf bro. i got 2 songs up atm.

Thanks...uppin' for some more feed...I will be peepin' your songs.

gettin more comfortable-- emotion sounded real in the joint, u were feelin urself-- only thing I can say so far is that your kinda robotic- like ur concentrating on hitting the beat too much... lyrics are decent... some rushed lines... and it ends kinda abruptly-- keep doin ur thing kikko...1