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50hater_killer 01-21-05 11:32 AM

thug beach
 
opener-
life will semes intemite with full of hatred,
but you got to keep thinkin that the greatest will only want this,
for tupac said I lived a good life and now I live with god,
he looks down at as while we lay at thug beach,

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have you ever wondered what it would be like,
without streets fights or even if their was no homies that acted like dikes,
Lyin on this beach is like a great vacation for we all can get away from our stress,
but in the bronx we all are left to bare for ourselves as if their was mothers dress
but come on homies lie here with me as we take this great day to lay at da beach
imagine if their was no war neither no sorrow or if their was no bronx oh what a treat!


come all homes you all are invitied theirs no hate neither no color,
for we all are gathered here under one rapper,
they say jesus was givin for our sins,
but I believe TUPAC bared all of our great broken lims,
so bring on the whiskey for we are all here to stay,
bust out the towels for ur here at thug beach.



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50hater_killer 01-21-05 02:08 PM

uppin for some feedback. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

50hater_killer 01-21-05 08:17 PM

uppin fur some feedback. ;)

Hitchcock 01-21-05 10:41 PM

eehh it was ok could b a lil more thought out tho. didnt flow as well as it could have but otherwise it wwas ok.not really feelin the topic too much tho if there even was one sort of unclear, keep elevatin on that

50hater_killer 01-22-05 08:46 AM

naw its not no topical its just the name of this mic peace and thnx.


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