THE_ONE vs 3x
 

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Check in by: 01-26-05 at 11:50 AM

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THE_ONE has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-21-05 11:52 AM.

You gettin knocked out the ballpark, i call you Sammy So-Sad/
Writin rhymes for hallmark, your best shit is saved on note PAD/
where's your gonads?......i think you forgot them in your boy/
if this kid pooped out acid, thats the only way your shit would destroy/
i start the war.....break down metal doors with metaphors/
getting nervous to drop shit, like public bathrooms with no doors/
i spark this....mic and leave you a heartless carcus/
this kid's tryin to steal my rhymes like Luda from underground artists/
Erode ur flows, like water u can't hold ur own form/
Let his dome torn fuck bitches every day like i make home porn/
Kid can't get his own label, so he creates his own fable/
"dis-in-vowel' U from the navel.... robbin his rhymes, like a baby from the cradle/
Go WWE on this bitch, like im battling sable/
Got this pussy, hiding undertneath the table/


quick keystyle nothing much butr enough to merk you

3x has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-05 07:18 PM.

you say your the one but realy you is none/
so i sugest you turn your back and run /cause while im at the top youll fizzle at the bottom / and they call you butter fingers since your you slip of your dick/
and this mother fuckers tryin to rap even though hes a hick/and this dudes 17 and hes never won a battle/and to finish it of i think your mom wants you to check the cattle/

if you wanna know why i wrote what i did just read his profile

Voted For: THE_ONE

da_1 my vote goes 2 u it was ok but step it up a lil more

opena, punches, mutlis, vocab, overall, structure, & closa goes 2 da_1

3x ur shit was weak improve a lil more den try anotha battle lata on down da road

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Voted For: THE_ONE

yeah the one did take this battle pretty easily 3x verse wasnt hot at all. he needs to work on makin his punches more creative n hit harder. n work on that structure it just makes it annoying to read when it runs on like that. the one verse was pretty good ight flow, but work on ur punches too those wont work against a stronger opponent.
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Voted For: THE_ONE

V/the_one.....this wasn't the best verse but he gets my vote his punchs hit harder they were creative an he had good structure wit vocab....3x u need to elavate u had no punchs really ur verse was to basic an ur structure needs werk...no hate...juss elavate....
punchs=one
personals=one
structure=one
multi's=(none really)
opener=one
closer=one
vocab=one
overall=The_one
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