"If I Die"
 

Shit I did for the Street Terror mixed tape put together by Tha Q...

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1908710
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1908718

if you really died

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i'ed piss on ya grave lol

i liked this the verses were on point and good flowing and the effects you gave it was good this was one of the best ive seen from you and it is good i liked the creativty and effects you gave alot but the chorus was kinda fucked....iunno but it coulda been done better even by you it could of been done better i just wasn't really feeling that part as much as the verses you had but dont worry about the chorus its still good....good job i like this alot...

damn lots of rv cats got good potential to be somewhere...damn

yo dis was nice....
-shit was propa deep in places man
-i didnt mind the chorus fitted well i reckon
-lyrics on point and it flowed gd
-gd tone of voice 4 the songs theme, ur voice was soft n dat if u get me
-was expectin nostra to kick in sumwhere, dis is the type fo shit he dus all the time (hint....make a coolab of dis, wud b sick)

-tight drop son..

effects on this was coo.........lyrics were coo.....flow was aight.......overall this was aight

soundclicks being a bitch, so im listenin lo-fi, i wont comment on quality...
words are kinda hard to hear for me, but in the beginning you had some lines that drew me in the really try to listen... slow movin track- chorus is cool- i dunno what it is about it, its different i kinda like it... q did a good job puttin it all together- it sounds decent on lo-fi probly much better on mp3... i dunno it sounds though like it just needs something- like its good as it is, but its not a real attention grabber all the way through... keep droppin em...1

This was a Good drop..Like the concept..Flow was Good..Lyrics Good..Keep droppin Fam..E z..

aiight first thing I noticed. You need to upp yo emotion a lil, man. But it's better than when you started. Shit takes a while, but you'll get it soon. Flow wasn't bad. Could be better. Lyrics were pretty nice. Quality was ok. But nice drop, beat was aiight too. Wasn't feelin' hook tho. But keep droppin'. pc 7/10

RTF @
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172212

Thanks...uppin' for some more feed, I will be returning favors shortly...

i was gonna use this beat...but chose not too...its nice tho


ur lyrics are pretty nice...but your flow needs a lil tweakin...ur on beat, but it aint ridin it as nicely as it could...


good track altogether though


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ARGH...I WAS GONNA USE THIS BEAT...INFACT I'M USING THIS BEAT FOR MY DEMO -_-...meh this was aight nice flow hook coulda been better but lol @ using this beat...they say great minds think alike...lol...keep em comin

DECENT TRACK HEARD THE BEAT BEFORE ALL IN ALL A DECENT TRACK BUT FINETUNE YA FLOW DELIVERY IS A LIL OFF IN SOME AREAS-give some return feedback on thirdself badmen

A'ight thanks all...uppin' for some mroe feed...returnin' favors now...

it was a pretty good song......the chorus was kinda weird....but it was straight.....overall it was a pretty cool track...i was feeling it......flow was tight..and the beats ok..i dont really like that beat...but good job overall 7.5/10

Delivery is blah, sounds like you don't even care on the mic. Flow is ok, with a better delivery it could sound better. The hook is wack, drop that and put some lyrics there, word don't really work on this. Up your delivery and it could be alot better.