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"It's Over"
It's Over Now why does it have to be like this Knowing that it will be you'll I will miss It's a bad situation, no one can win After a long time, its going to end Its bad enough you cheated, but you did it with my friend I think you're cheating, whats up with that I already apologized for that as a matter of fact So why did you have to go and stab me in the back come on, what could have possesed you to do that You thinki down on me, you think im slow You dont know, that I know, what you know With you like this, there is no way we can get closer Im not sorry, I have to say its over |
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Damn bro that was heart-felt.
Seems like something shit happened to you man. Im sorry for ya. Its like this: The verse was from the heart, but the vocab and structure seemed a little undeveloped. There was some good lines but i think you need to work on your vocab and add in a metaphor or two, bit of wordplay and some shit like that. keep doing ya thing BRO |
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to fukkin short u shud make it longa den ill actually injoy it
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Your wordplay was unpredictable and i injoyed lots,i think you should keep doing poetry.
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