50hater_killer vs CompleX
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dickriderz

Topical

topic ur the president and u just been shot at

emotion
flow
imagry
vocab
structure
opener-closure

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-24-05 at 04:23 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

CompleX has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-21-05 04:26 PM.

50hater_killer has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-21-05 05:24 PM.

chek diz..........

Nigga wanna kill me cuz i cruz in the Air forc one
Tryin to do good yet punks wanna git me wit they gun
They tryin to make me done ; straight put one in me
all i did was succsed; an haterz wanna turn me into 2005 president kennedy*
Niggaz i don't even know tryin to but a end to me
so many enimes hell is all the day seems to bring
im here for the people so why they tryin to noc out they king**
i beginin 2 think niggaz can't be happy 4 dae fellow human being

* kennedy was assasinated
** look at dae name of 50haterz crew

These bullets whizzing by my head has me wondering,
what cruel man would want me in my early bed?
Walkin throw the streets and waving at my men,
has me clamping on to my own life as it gets dim,
I called out this fight back in 01
witch my assains think that I have been done,
so as I cling onto my polticial life,
I can not bare but try to grasp onto my wife.

ok upppppppppin for some votes peace. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin dis bat!

uppin diz folkz ..........
will return fav...........

Voted For: CompleX

i think complex took this battle. it was too short for a topical tho. kinda hard to really build a mood but i liked complex's spit better n it had better vocab n was alittle more thoroug. not much to vote on tho
holla at me

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Voted For: 50hater_killer

iono....jus somethin boot dis verse dat i like more

:laugh2: what DA fuc is dis bull shit dat don't explain notin

ya vote should git Dqed but i leave it 2 50hater_killer :nono: