Fuck Lyrical Cataclism
 

basicall it sthe jury vs. L.cataclism and i didnt get a battle (*sobs)
so i basically used the crew battle as a chance to fucka about sum mo wid cool edit...i think im gettin betta at this audio ting...drop sum feedbak y'all...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173170
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173179

PEACE :thumbup:

LINK IN SIG!!!!

bump.............

where u from?-- anyway, beat drop in strong and u hop on... flow-- is not great-- writing wise your using good rhymes, just some of your lines especially in the beginning are stretched so it hampers your flow. Sounds like it improves as the track goes on- just try maybe next time to write more for the beat your using, keep droppin though it wasn't bad. 1

tha\nks man...will be kept in mind...yea i didnt write to the beat it was a lil rhyme that i did and felt like spittin..didnt realise its obvious when ppl dnt write 2 a beat...so ill do it that way ratha than tryin 2 fit it 2 it...peace

im from east london......if ur wodnerin bout tha accent :thumbup:

yeah man only thing you need to work on is not putting so many words together and spreading them out on the track a little and changing up your flow at certain parts also, accent really doesnt bother me, I mean a rapper could spit something in Germain threw a whole track and I would still ride to it lol its all just flowing to the beat perfectly

Not feelin the accent.

Sorry, unless ur Nos....I only like americans.
London people an ausies sound like cartoon characters to me.

Also.
U can tell...were u break, and restart.-1

fair nuff bout the accent dats u..but in UK it'd fit in jus right lol

and ur damn right bout the restart thing..i cudnt blend it right..im still workin on ma mixin