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Until The End- Single..
..Until The End Chorus.. Dont bother listening to some people, most are dumb If you go your way, it’ll all balance out on your thumb.. Work hard to achieve whatcha need, don’t show greed Decide witch way you wanna go, and then you’ll know.. Witch way was most correct, better be a good decision Pick best and then you’ll know you’ll last in your division.. Gotta work hard to achieve whatcha looking For Anyway possible tell the end of life even if your Sore Don’t even settle down, work even if your Horrible Stand up to anyone, life aint sweet nor Adorable Try & beat the impossible and make it your Possible Search for that spot on that record label, be Stable Possibly then you wont trip like you were Unstable When ever theres a cat saying he’ll pop out a Gun Don’t bother listening, hes frontin a whole lot a Ton Be quite don’t talk back and work hard, you’ll Elevate Be like a Asian monk and meditate, just be Straight Never lie, never front, never be on such a Wrong Flows good or flows bad either way you got a Song Just be strong and then it’ll always feel like you Belong If you end up saying shit you’ll end up in Surgery People always thinking about you, from your Family You must have done something wrong, of Coarse Listening to others, without trying, you fell off Course You shoulda gone with your own style and Loyalty Be loyal to yourself and create your own Royalty.. Chorus.. Dont bother listening to some people, most are dumb If you go your way, it’ll all balance out on your thumb.. Work hard to achieve whatcha need, don’t show greed Decide witch way you wanna go, and then you’ll know.. Witch way was most correct, better be a good decision Pick best and then you’ll know you’ll last in your division.. |
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•Para¶el•... that was a solid drop man. I liked how the structure was basically flawless, and how good it's flow was. Very good drop. The chorus had a good message and the verse was dope too.
Don’t even settle down, work even if your Horrible Stand up to anyone, life aint sweet nor Adorable ^^ Those two lines had to be my favourite part of the Open Mic. I like what you did with this man. Enjoyable to read. I would have to rate this Open Mic an 8/10. - Red. |
pretty good drop here,
had a nice flow, pretty decent topic vocab was good too, but overall nice topic on here though, nuttin much, but keep doing ya thing 7/10 |
yea not ym best i can do way better then this...but anyway uppin..
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um uppin.......
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it wuz fukin wack.......................fuck my eyez!
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fuck you.......
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lol u are realli wack......no hate hahah
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ight kool...i want feedback not christism...uppin
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Parallel that was a tight ass drop man I was feelin that whole verse. :thumbup: NICE DROP ONCE AGAIN.
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thanks alot....uppin
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could i get soem mroe feed..uppin
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it was eehhh......the drop to me didn't really make sense......at all...no offense....but elavate some more..and work on ya story telling...overall boutta 6.7/10
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This was a pretty tight drop P...flow was very consistent...your vocabulary was there...you a pretty dope chorus too...nice drop P...8/10
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