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Creative Vs Un-xpected
1ST TO FIVE WINS
3-0=KO NO CREW OR DICKRIDE OR HATE VOTES NO BITING OR RECYCLIN OR FEEDIN 10-16 BAR LIMIT... HOLLA....VERSES DUE SATURDAY AT MIDNIGHT PLAYA.... OUT 1 |
aight kew just checkin in........
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aight......
YO,yo,yo This fucks played out and old like home alone fell off the vikes stadium and still couldn't spit off the dome/ So affixiated wit 'knomes' and his nasty ass 'shit' this kat takes a 'small' 'shit' to resemble his 'spits'/ suppose to be tight this verse was due tonight but this kat changed it to saturday-night?/ i got bitches to due drugz and liquor to spew last thing i want to due on saturday is rip you/ that makes me think you a 'lion' genius 'ripinopen'(look unda his handle) the lion king movie and jackin his penis/ how could his dad and mom ever of seen this an 'un-xpected' birth of this faggot extremeist/ I wack kats the meanist x ejackulated my dick and still couldn't beat this/ ay yo fuck minnesota i aint no viking im a fuckin god comin at you wit lightning/ electricity you cant even imagine i knocked out Balrog(that boxer in his sig) and bagged him/ get off streetfighter that shits older then saggen shitt this kat couldn't make a virgin bleed if she was raggin/.. Edited for mistakes |
AIGHT..........
Ima go kill ya ass,and ya wack-ass verse isn't even stoppin me// You gotta 'small chance' of winnin,like a midget playin monopoly// Creative can't think straight,cuz i drew circles on his brain// This cat can't elevate his punches,even if he had a boxin match on a airplane// I can't believe this bitch think he gon beat me with his gay flow// Ya wouldn't have wins(winds) on the board,even if ya was a surfin wit a tornado// THis dumb muthafucka sat on a clock,to show me his ass was on time// Someone musta stole ya brain,cuz battlin me?Ya really lost ya mind// Like puttin poles in a trash can,Creative ya muthafuckin bars stink// Ya spits is goin down the drain,I guess Creative should stop vomittin in his sink// Only time ya word-play is dope,is if ya played wheel of fortune while smokin pot// Ya need to inject medicine into the L.L.B.L heavyweight belt,cuz that the only way u gettin a title shot// Kid ya wack,ya shouldn't even be on rapbattles,im sorry but thats the truth// Ur NETting career is goin down in flames,like Kerry Kittles on fire fallin from a roof// Beatin UN-XPECTED in this battle?Better chance seening an afro on MJ's head// This cat put blood on his verse,just so he could have his rhymes red(read)// AIGHT UPPIN FOR VOTES..........1 *EDITED FOR TYPOS* |
UPPIN FOR THEM VOTES..
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un xpected definetly got it, he had better punches and a nicer flo.
vote: un-xpected |
Ok.. Over all Craetive had A verse That would Be Around a 6.. Un-xpected tho had like a 7/8..
Metaphors=Un Punchs=Un Rhyme scheme=Un Vocab= un basicly.. Un took over the battle, with his vese.. It was just better, Came harder with flow,punchs, and metaphors.. One vote=Un-xpected |
AIGHT THANX FOR THE VOTES YALL...2-0 ME UPPIN
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Un had the better rhyme scheme and punches clearly....
Vote=UN-EXPECTED |
AIGHT GOOD BATTLE NIGGA KO....
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