MARVjay1009 vs cinnamon20ohio
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-24-05 at 10:17 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

cinnamon20ohio has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-21-05 10:18 PM.

hey marvgay what the hell is that shit i read nigga u sholda kept ya ass in bed cause ya rhymes dont make no sense got me thinkin what tha hell is this better put this nigga in his place he makin us all look like a disgrace dr suese could do better then that rappin bout green eggs an ham what u mad gonna go call ya fam god damn what they gonna do give u some pointers on how to beat me my rhymes come at u like a raging bull and all u can do is sit there and stare twirlin ya fake ass hair hopin i dont see u ova there but i did and now u cryin what u not bitch stop lyin thas y u sittin there tryin to figure outa way to get out of this mess but u cant cause u already clicked accept so take it like the tran u r so untape the dick out from unda ya legs and take it like a man ya herd

:spit: hey marvgay what the hell is that shit i read nigga u sholda kept ya ass in bed cause ya rhymes dont make no sense got me thinkin what tha hell is this better put this nigga in his place he makin us all look like a disgrace dr suese could do better then that rappin bout green eggs an ham what u mad gonna go call ya fam god damn what they gonna do give u some pointers on how to beat me my rhymes come at u like a raging bull and all u can do is sit there and stare twirlin ya fake ass hair hopin i dont see u ova there but i did and now u cryin what u not bitch stop lyin thas y u sittin there tryin to figure outa way to get out of this mess but u cant cause u already clicked accept so take it like the tran u r so untape the dick out from unda ya legs and take it like a man ya herd :spit: :gfy:

spit that shit ya herd meh

hey marvgay what the hell is that shit i read nigga u sholda kept ya ass in bed cause ya rhymes dont make no sense got me thinkin what tha hell is this better put this nigga in his place he makin us all look like a disgrace dr suese could do better then that rappin bout green eggs an ham what u mad gonna go call ya fam god damn what they gonna do give u some pointers on how to beat me my rhymes come at u like a raging bull and all u can do is sit there and stare twirlin ya fake ass hair hopin i dont see u ova there but i did and now u cryin what u not bitch stop lyin thas y u sittin there tryin to figure outa way to get out of this mess but u cant cause u already clicked accept so take it like the tran u r so untape the dick out from unda ya legs and take it like a man ya herd

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-05 01:00 PM.

cmon marv whats ya punk ass doin u clicked accept lets get this battle in effect drop a verse what u afraid u gonna get burnt on your shit by a bitch well dont worry we already knew thats was gonna happen ull be 2 days trien to figuren out what to say nonetha less ya rhymes still gay as hell u lucky they dont put u in jail for lame ass rhymes cause ur ass would be doin mad time i can picture u sittin in the cell face lookin all pail cause u got raped so many times u just wished u would die then u got smart n u finnaly hung yaself and i read ya ass in tha daily timez u just a punk nigga who cant hold his own thas y u still at home with ya moma beggin her ta deaf for a dolla

lol...look

dis bitch should die!..u must dont know how sick am i...
cinnamon was so shook he spit his bars in da quick reply...
3 times lol....i do dis me dunny FUKK a DaMM FaN.......
when dem "T.i.P'S" hit u they not bouncin off u aint a "rubber band-man"
lol..dont get at mad jay cuzz ya hoe run with him....
ya punchlines like dem "bird man lugz" y? cuzz "no 1 get em"
trust me fam u dont worry dis guy..u must be in a hurry da die
fukk ya fam like "shyne cd" i'll get ya "god father buried alive"
da person who birth you...yeah i use da luv da touch-her....
fam im ya "dad" guess datz y u keep callin me "mother-fucker"
talkin bout u thuggin in ohio lol stop it ya ass a lier....
i'll put da "heat 2 ya newborn" then "pass-her-fire"....
ya crew neva sold shit so prick ya men-dont-grind....
stupid go at "marvjay" u'll get found dead at "10:09"....

last bar...marvjay1009 get it..

Voted For: cinnamon20ohio

cinnamon20ohio you are joking right?

....................i hope.

Removed

hahahaha shit........i was just checking the polls for my homeboy Marv never meant to click vote. I'll go get it removed.

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

.......................do i realli hafta explain???
marvjay u killed him..gd metas and hard punches ur structure waz gd but onli one line was strecthed....RTF IN MA SIG
MA BATTLEZ GETTIN SLEPT ON.

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Yo marvjay gets this, one sided battle...

Marvjay- Nice verse, first line was self braggin, but u had nice punches throughout...best lines was ya bird man line and the shyne line<< shit that rymes... aiite ya closer was wack, shoulda excluded it but rest of ya verse was nice.. good punches and a couple good lines

Cinnamon- Not bad for a noob, but you came weak... opener was decent, gave me good expectations but then u went downhill... it was just a ramblin mess with no structure or content.. a couple attempted personals, but they missed completely, and ya punches was aiite, but u didn't have many... Pretty weak here, just work on structure, and content with more personals and punches

Vote/ Marvjay1009, just had overall better verse... better punches and personals, and actually had a structure

uppin 4 1 more fukkin vote and lets close dis shit

uppin 4 more votes in dis bitch