Empire vs Nemesis
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No hate votes
No D/R votes

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 01-25-05 at 08:36 AM

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Nemesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-05 08:37 AM.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-05 08:40 AM.

keep dat talking, coz ill shove da barrel down ya throat
coz nemesis culdnt elevate,,,if he had da ability 2 float!
ur wack kid, face da facts,,before i implant razorz in ya back
wen ya rhymez 'pop' off,,,they always turn out to be flat!
nemesis huh??you copyed dat name from da game resident evil
ur rhyming culdnt b reckless,,,if u were related to evil kanevil!
ill fukkin own u and everthing u post,,like angry mailmen
dis is jus 'childz play' coz im battaling dis 'kid' in a fukkin play=pen
post ur verse bitch,.,,coz its jus lyk pre-ordering ya hearse,,,
look @ ur posts got a nice set there but we still waiting 4 ur skillz 2 emerge!
nemesis culdnt put-a-break 2 my punchs,,if he waz in da drivers seat
ive crushed dis fool,,,but he aint my nemesis cuz he aint no threat 2 me!

dere im dun,,,,quik spit were da fukk iz ur verse u bitch

Look at this D/R shit stole his name from a vet
u aint shit ill burn u like ants cuz u aint a threat
actin like u hard but u a herb tellin ppl they suck
fuckin wit me ill make ya jaws like a studder stuck
My punches hittin u so hard makin u Disintegrate
cuz this verse will make ur bitch ass turn straight
STFU u get made fun of more then retaded kids
Personals got ya shocked like a baby with S.I.D.S
u actin gangser online but u cant even spell right
keep fuckin with me and ill have the glock igntite

^^^^^^^^^^^^^66hahahahahhah Merked!!!!.......................

Voted For: Nemesis

Nemesis
Wow You Elivating Quickly Man, This Battle Was Close In Some Ways But This Is What Nemesis Had Over Empire....
Nemesis Had Better Vocabulary, His Structure Was On Target......Similies Was Cool Try Make It Into Meta's Though You Had Some Multi's Not To Much......Also You Need Help With Punches Dead On Coz It Wasn't To Hard Hitting

Empire
This Is Where You Had Him In Punches, You Had Him Targeted
Was Decent Alot Of Lines Where Creative In Here It's What I Liked, You Had Him With Multi's Also Scoring Points Here Which Was Good In This Battle, Overall This Battle Was Close But If I Had To Pick It's Nemesis

Structure-Nemesis
Vocabulary-Nemesis
Similies/Meta's-Nemesis
Punches-Empire
Flow-Tie

Vote-Nemesis

coo can we get this uppin plz people no hate votes or D/R votes ok. :thumbup:

Voted For: Empire

empire won this. his punches were better although all of them weren't great his were still better then nemesis's. structure was a tie and his attempt at a personal with the resident evil joke wasnt good but wasnt terrible. neither really had the vocab to me but this still goes to empire.

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Voted For: Empire

shit was wun sided...nemesis fam u cant pop shit 2 ppl and rap like dat lmaooo dis aint a hate vote dis shit is honest ya opener sounded like somthin a lil kidd playin around would say step ya shit up tell cali da etach u how da rap sicne u always runnin behind him and i set up a battle with us ya gay ass neva accepted..but aneway back 2 dis battle...empire u had a solid verse not great some of ya lines were long but its all good it dont matter cuzz look who u battlin lol u had a personal dat was cool overall ya shit was more consistant than his datz why u get my vote

opener-emp
structure-nem
punchlines-emp
creativity-emp
multis-nun
wordplay-nun
personals-emp
finisher-umm both of ya'll shits was wack so datz a tie
enjoyed- empire...he took dis nem da only thin ur good at is havin a neat structure besides dat i dont c shit else


return da vote ya'll

Voted For: Empire

Good battle but an obvious winner i think.

Nemesis' verse was good with some cool punches but the standard of metaphors and personlas wasnt to match that of Empire's

best line: "Look at this D/R shit stole his name from a vet
u aint shit ill burn u like ants cuz u aint a threat"
-Good opener and good personal.

worst: "My punches hittin u so hard makin u Disintegrate
cuz this verse will make ur bitch ass turn straight"
-Terrible punch in my opinion.

Empire, after reading this verse i came to the conclusion you are dope! Great metas, personals, and punches were on a completely higher level than your opponant.

best line:"nemesis huh??you copyed dat name from da game resident evil
ur rhyming culdnt b reckless,,,if u were related to evil kanevil!"
-Dope as fuck

worst: cant say.