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Biggz vs King~~Dipset
Battle Rules:
14-20 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting A Topical battle Topic: Your telling A Girl why You love her Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-22-05 at 03:10 PM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
King~~Dipset has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-05 01:11 PM.
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Dear Lover,
I Think You ask Me Why I Love You so well This Is why [i] Love Vs. Hate, Because Hate hates to love Hate os opposite of how I feel for you though I made a Mistake and I'd like to forgiven Trust me My love is real, and unforbidden I Love to see you Smile thats why I always Joke When I Speak To you I Just Studder And Choke you havent noticed? You make me so nervouse That i Might say something that might come between us I know how you feel for me and You know how I feel for You thats how You Know my love is Unconditionally True If our Love is A Straight Tower Then Why are we Leaning? Come on Baby you cant actually Think that im scheeming. Just Think Me and you........as Long as you want To remember Those words gurl I can make them come true I Didnt have to say it for you to beleave it from the Start And everyday I know you get the same feeling In your heart The way I feel is unable To be put into This Love letter So im hopin that itll make your love for me alot better I Love you Girl And now you know Why Do I Love you so[i/] Good luck !! |
Biggz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-05 01:27 PM.
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Thanx mayne fo not Ditching Out on Me ............
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I see your beauty in more ways than you know,
I love you more than I could ever show. There are no words that I can use to express, How much I care for you, but I’ll do my best. I tease you about your deprived life, Truth is it makes you more appealing in my sight. You are a true person, and my luck is amazing, I’ve never felt this way, I think I am going crazy. I’m in love, that’s all I can say, I hope that this confession does not turn you away. You have helped me beyond belief, I owe you so much, Whenever I thank God for blessings, my first one is luck. My life was on its knees, but then you and God helped it back up, You helped me see how far I was from how I was brought up. I’ll summarize this song so you know what I have been saying, I only need 4 words, I love you Megan! I see your beauty in more ways than you know, I love you more than I could ever show. These words do not compare to how I really feel, But nothing can express it, and that’s for real. |
Uppidy Uppidy Up ........Please vote in these battle please
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Voted For: King~~Dipset
Aii this Is how i Feel King~~Dipset Opening was great Mayne Im lovin This rii Here Your Last Two Stanza'a were great .......Um Far as Ya Structure i like To see it centered its better that way if you know what i mean And Also Your Last Closing Was Aii But Ya opening really Hooked my attention So Ya did Great 10/10 Biggz You did ai But Ya Structure was off And ya topic Was like you were just Bitting Off of Dipset's verse But i can tell you Didnt But N e one else prolly couldnt Though Umm....>your lines were Cut short and its Not Good to be cutting ya lines short and stuff ...so ill have to give ya a 6/10 Sorry Mayne |
Voted For: Biggz
you won this shit dawg i liked your rhymes and your skill nice lines and you could werk on ya structure a bit but tother than that you rolled this cigar homie Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: King~~Dipset
King Dipset- Your Verse on the topic was very nice....I mean you stayed on topic....Your vocab....was 100% nice i thought...Also showed alot of emotion at times...and your structure was very well layed out.....*8/10*.... Biggz- Your verse on the topic...ehhh i wasnt feelin it too much...but i mean it was decent....But you had some good vocab in it....But your structure maybe should be layed out more better n all......But overall.....*5.5/10*.... v/King Dipset Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
how did that vote from WO get DQed? i didnt complain or anythin
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Evry Now and then The MODS come through And delete All Unexplained votes But That vot ethat WO did was explained ......WTF .......aye nawl ...NVM ima win n e ways LOL
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Voted For: King~~Dipset
THis was a decent battle...... kind of close, but i think Scareface definitely pulled it out.... HIs closer blew Biggz out of the water... and u also used metas to compliment ur verse Biggz - u had a nice lil verse for this topical, but it was very straightforward and simplistic, and u need to up ur game for a battle.... u shouldve added in metas to make ur verse better cuz those really help in topical battles.... u juss sed "i love u" alot, and juss listed the reasons with no thought it seemed.... Scareface - on the other hand, u seemed to have urs well thought out.... the letter part about it was a nice addition to it that really helped ur verse in the closer... also the metas in ur verse surpassed ur verse over Biggz.... such as the Leaning tower one.. however, u could improve ur verse becuase u had some mistakes spellin and grammar, but that was prolly juss cuz ur head was workin faster than ur fingers wen u were typin this..... Overall, this was a decent battle, but i think the more complexity and thought put into Scarefaces verse won him this battle in the end........ OHH, and i dropped an honest vote in ur battle...... can u please return the favor to the battle in my sig with CALI...... its been open for so long, and at times its gone days without a single vote..... id greatly appreciate it.... and please, if u do vote in it, make it long enough so it will not be dqed for a short explanation...... thanx!! :thumbup: |
A FUx justaword That Link In Ya Sig dint work rii Mayne waz goin on .....I want to rtf But the link dont work
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ok..... try this: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...00&page=1&pp=15
and if that doesnt work u can juss search up "c.a.l.i FuxJustAWord" and it should pop up....... id really appreciate it man |
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