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Effect 01-22-05 04:42 PM

shit
 
I can't ever seem to with hold my anger
I feel like im being pulled apart in diff angles
all these differen't faces are on my cases
all these rasists... that I find in all places
sick of the jocks they come out in flocks
thinkin they rock but get shot from blocks
strangled by there socks it's pretty funny
nothings sunny Im just desperate 4 money
im taking everything.... people say inside
my thoughts hope this guy would just die
everybody is lookin to for new shit to start
u fuckin retards watch me turn nasty n hard
Think what I might do and yes I mean you
you might get... killed just out of the blue
yea it's true keep... on doubting on my ass
fuck my past whoopin.... ur ass is my task
burrying u fast.... my shit in me gunna last
watch me knock...... you bitches out fast

.:F.ate:. 01-22-05 04:59 PM

a very short piece yet and still decent none the less. the anger you put into it is what really made reading it interesting.you really started off strong: the opener really draws you into the rest of it you know.
I think the best part of the whole thing was

I can't ever seem to with hold my anger
I feel like im being pulled apart in diff angles
all these differen't faces are on my cases
all these rasists... that I find in all places

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