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Da NFamous 07-18-02 10:05 PM

A More Poetic Peace
 
bomb shell casing around me im fire personofied//
my mic purity is only comparable to my religion, bonafide//
walls against my side tight roping lyricism perfection//
words speak the heart those who lack the connection are only guessin//
i sit and laugh at stupid jokes while blood is being shed//
should i feel perpetually sullen because another human beings dead?//
imagine a nation of thugs considered a world power//
unifying every ghetto every one with crack, dope and a flower//
utilization is tamin spirits while ignorant eyes cannot see//
the ultimate task force of words manifested thru me//
its been sed what i speak is a poem my words worthy of the pearly gates//
but its unfurling hate that keeps my lyricism in lucifers crates//
i sleep in roswell cause my intergalactic knowledge is not yet known here//
for being hot and sicker then the average enemies think i show fear//
gaurenteed to deliver illness like aids poisoning my motherland//
not just guns but microphones can leave nations in genocide from this undacova man//
1luv.

kmfrob 07-19-02 06:13 AM

This was tight son. ur vocab was nice and actually made sense and not just using big words to make it seem like ya intelligent. concept aint original but u handled it well. the only main criticism i could really say is u need to use more effective multis. anyway liked it and check mine ninja philosophy aight peace.

Da NFamous 07-19-02 07:07 PM

thank you for tha only bit of recognition, elevatin

Acidic 07-20-02 01:24 PM

yo tis was hot feelin everyline u worded it well and it came off ill aight keep it up

BlackKnight 07-20-02 02:24 PM

Truth In Parellel Lines Of Ryhme.
I Admire Your Creativeness That Does More Than Just Define.
Keep The Flowz A Flowing...
Check Out My Piece Called ''Words Of Closure
Peace Out

...OrigiNATE... 07-20-02 02:29 PM

Already Stated But.....Good Job W/ Vocab...Some Cats Use High Vocab and Forget about makin sense....Holla At Poetic Scriptures

Da NFamous 07-20-02 05:18 PM

thanks for the posotivity yall, elevatin, 1luv.


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