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A More Poetic Peace
bomb shell casing around me im fire personofied//
my mic purity is only comparable to my religion, bonafide// walls against my side tight roping lyricism perfection// words speak the heart those who lack the connection are only guessin// i sit and laugh at stupid jokes while blood is being shed// should i feel perpetually sullen because another human beings dead?// imagine a nation of thugs considered a world power// unifying every ghetto every one with crack, dope and a flower// utilization is tamin spirits while ignorant eyes cannot see// the ultimate task force of words manifested thru me// its been sed what i speak is a poem my words worthy of the pearly gates// but its unfurling hate that keeps my lyricism in lucifers crates// i sleep in roswell cause my intergalactic knowledge is not yet known here// for being hot and sicker then the average enemies think i show fear// gaurenteed to deliver illness like aids poisoning my motherland// not just guns but microphones can leave nations in genocide from this undacova man// 1luv. |
This was tight son. ur vocab was nice and actually made sense and not just using big words to make it seem like ya intelligent. concept aint original but u handled it well. the only main criticism i could really say is u need to use more effective multis. anyway liked it and check mine ninja philosophy aight peace.
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thank you for tha only bit of recognition, elevatin
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yo tis was hot feelin everyline u worded it well and it came off ill aight keep it up
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Truth In Parellel Lines Of Ryhme.
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Already Stated But.....Good Job W/ Vocab...Some Cats Use High Vocab and Forget about makin sense....Holla At Poetic Scriptures
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thanks for the posotivity yall, elevatin, 1luv.
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