Plutonium vs Skriptz
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 = KO

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 01-24-05 at 06:19 PM

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Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-05 07:16 PM.

Plutonium has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-05 02:32 AM.

skriptz attempts to earn the "w"...but initially ain't a good sport
his biting & all his "copping"...is just a couple of doughnuts short
all the attempted racism...just get off the crack you fighting with
kid can't make a hit...even if he fell off the horse he came riding in
born to lose...skripts probably was once jumped by kid hackers
put his computer's CPU in a bird...it would probably fly backwards
in a switch, I'd rip da shit outta this bitch...you might as well die kid
his old name was Sik with it...explains why his sik rhymes is also considered old shit

oh by the way skriptz why do you set up all the battles in frontlines?

Voted For: Plutonium

LOL LOL LOL LOL...............GOOD WRK PLUTONUM.........born to lose...skripts probably was once jumped by kid hackers
put his computer's CPU in a bird...it would probably fly backwards
in a switch, I'd rip da shit outta this bitch...you might as well die kid
his old name was Sik with it...explains why his sik rhymes is also considered old shit......

LOL^^^^^^^^^^ good shit plutonium good filler and structure dope flow and vocab wuz in the bag here.....good shit ,,,,,meta i doubt any1 will get ur shit but i kninda did good conclusion....but felt plutonium comin harder......harder punches,,,,,,,there by him overall plutonium......rest my case.....
yo return the favour in the battle below plutonium me vs diplosive,,,,aiihgt

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Voted For: Plutonium

Skriptz

Who the hell are you? This homo says he’s good, stick to what you do
You can jock anyone’s name, and still no one will even know you
^okay opener

You claiming you hard, but I already know that your soft man
Your rhymes are just coming up short, like Gary Coleman
^hehe,good one!

Plutonium can’t even have the knowledge if you went left, and I told you…
…to go right
If you thought you was the best in owning, you couldn’t even own this site
^nice nice

This homo’s lines is whack, and stretched more than rubber bands
Plutonium could let his punches fall from a building, and they still wouldn’t land
^mad played but still cool

Vocab was good, flow n structure were tight.Had some good hardhitting punches in there, here and there it was a bit played though but still,solid drop!Wordplay was cool to but seen better from you in fact...


Plutonium

skriptz attempts to earn the "w"...but initially ain't a good sport
his biting & all his "copping"...is just a couple of doughnuts short
^decent opener

all the attempted racism...just get off the crack you fighting with
kid can't make a hit...even if he fell off the horse he came riding in
^nice bar

born to lose...skripts probably was once jumped by kid hackers
put his computer's CPU in a bird...it would probably fly backwards
^good good

in a switch, I'd rip da shit outta this bitch...you might as well die kid
his old name was Sik with it...explains why his sik rhymes is also considered old shit
^haha,cool closer!

Better vocab, structure was good but wasn't always feeling your flow in fact...Had some good creative punches n personals in there, wordplay was nice to and overall, good job!


Close battle but I'm going with Plutonium, no hate but I was just feeling his verse a little more. Felt he had more creativity in his verse but both did a good job!

Voted For: Skriptz

Plutonium
i liked your verse in all but you lacked being more creative then skriptz was i just thought you didnt write with more metas then skriptz did your vocab was weak actually boths were but your stucture might have been good and the flow was good i jsut thought you lacked punches to win this...you did have punches just not hard ones a few funn y lines with horses n shit liked that if you woulda done more ounches liek that you probably woulda won...no hate pz

skriptz:
your verse had more punches and metas to win this all tho your stcute was weak your punches and flow were good the vocab was weak but so was his...i jsut thought you had more funnier lines then him with a meta in each one so it was very creative and won you this...pz

opener: P
closer: S
metas: S
punches: S
stucutre: P
flow: tie
win/ Skriptz

Voted For: Skriptz

V/skriptz.......he gets my vote cause his verse was creative wit the punchs an his vocab was on point he had consistent diss's....plutonium.....ur verse was good at points but u lacked creative punchs u had sum played lines an not very much vocab.....no hate....good battle to both.....
punchs=skriptz
vocab=skriptz
multi's=(none really)
structure=skriptz
overall=skriptz
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Voted For: Skriptz

just cuz ur finale punch line....dats it...wasnt nuttin special

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Voted For: Skriptz

Skriptz
Alright Kid Decent Verse, You Had Some Well Vocabulary In Here, Structure Was Kind Of Off But, Punches Made Up FOr It, Had Some Multi's Not To Much In A Few Bars, Personals Was Decent...Over All Just Work On Structure Basically And You Good Man....8.5/10

Plutonium
Could Of Bin Better, You Had A Decent Structure, So You Won In That Category, Punches Was Alright But Skriptz Went Harder, Also Vocabulary Wasn't To Great, You Need Work On That....Add Some Multi's In Here Also And It'll Help Out You Rhyme Scheme Which Both Needs Work On....OverAll

Structure-Plutonium
Punches-Skriptz
Vocabulary-Skriptz
Multi's-Skriptz
Meta's-None

Vote-Skriptz

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Voted For: Skriptz

Skriptz
Who the hell are you? This homo says he’s good, stick to what you do
You can jock anyone’s name, and still no one will even know you
coo opener
You claiming you hard, but I already know that your soft man
Your rhymes are just coming up short, like Gary Coleman
this was decent
Plutonium can’t even have the knowledge if you went left, and I told you…
…to go right
If you thought you was the best in owning, you couldn’t even own this site
lol...nice
This homo’s lines is whack, and stretched more than rubber bands
Plutonium could let his punches fall from a building, and they still wouldn’t land
nice closer

pretty coo verse...you had some nice lines...flow was consistent and you also had some creativity...and you had some decent multies...8.5/10

Plutonium
skriptz attempts to earn the "w"...but initially ain't a good sport
his biting & all his "copping"...is just a couple of doughnuts short
coo opener
all the attempted racism...just get off the crack you fighting with
kid can't make a hit...even if he fell off the horse he came riding in
decent
born to lose...skripts probably was once jumped by kid hackers
put his computer's CPU in a bird...it would probably fly backwards
this was decent
in a switch, I'd rip da shit outta this bitch...you might as well die kid
his old name was Sik with it...explains why his sik rhymes is also considered old shit
lol...nice closer

coo verse...had a couple hot lines and the rest was decent...u had a little creativity and wordplay...no multies and your flow was a bit off...7/10

Voted For: Skriptz

Skriptz- verse was nice.....punches some were good and some we not....but your punches were better...had some nice personals..structure was layed out nice....easy to read n all...but overall you got my vote for better verse and punches...7.7/10....

Plutonium- your verse was aight i guess...i wasnt feelin it too much, even your punches didnt seem to hit hard, some of them were weak but then some were decent..had some nice personals...your structure was layed out good...but overall elevate & whatever....5.1/10......

v/Skriptz