Os1ris vs Blackmage
 

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10-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
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Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 01-24-05 at 07:54 PM

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Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-05 07:55 PM.

Os1ris has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-05 07:55 PM.

all your words are like a cancer patients dying breath repentence cause in every verse you Only Spit 1 Really Ill Sentence(spells os1ris)
rapverse needs to check how did you even get admittance
Skills Is Rated 1st stated obsolete and good riddence(os1ris backwards)
my bars will lock you away i'm a lyrical alkatraz
wit power pound on this coward to powder his talcom ass
in the middle yo malcom ass is sittin odd in the head(1 is odd)
judgin by yo lyrics you really are the god of the dead(osiris)
you say you from the squared circle but what ring's in question
just so you know you and ya lyrics are as fake as pro wrestling
i gotta give it to you, you got the heart to score
cause this guy is 1-4 and he still wants more
you soft core sophmore my verse is a neck amputant
where ya head at, you'll win when the nets win a championship
out my mouth is "sick shit" so i cough and flush
i'll toss u up cause you ain't just soft u plush
so often lush my lyrics pumped cross and u crushed
and i ain't even gotta rap when i talk you blush
you softened up and off as fuck don't try to win or act grown
mc hammer has a better chance of gettin a house loan

whatever this verse is blah anyway good luck

Blackmage sorry no support for ya, you get shitted on dude/
I got ya beat when you come unarmed like roman statues//
You winnin is like roseanne being a dodgeball player/
And you get no respect for originality like your avatar//
You could be an airpilot and still never be flyweight/
Your nothin but dollars thrills not even worth the net space//
Id say you had a good verse but id be straight lyin to you/
I'll step on mage's soul like I put my feet in your shoes//
Os1ris is sick and mage is nothin but lame talk/
I beat and run over any black like playground asphalt//
*finisher*
I'll stretch my bars and try to make the punch work like half these kids/
Mage tries to be black, but in the end he's still a redskin, like Clinton Portis//

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Voted For: Os1ris

V/os1ris.......he came harder wit punchs an his creativity wit them an his vocab was good his structure was also....blackmage....u had sum good lines but it wasn't good enough to get my vote i seen better from u....u werent really that consistent wit creative diss's an vocab....
punchs=os1ris
vocab=os1ris
structure=os1ris
opener=black mage
closer=os1ris
overall=os1ris
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

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Voted For: Os1ris

dat was hot u got my vote 4 originality, punches, multis, opena, closa, & personals

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you've seen better. hey i have fans. thanks for the votes rv uppin

Voted For: Blackmage

blackmage gets this......

damn nice mutlies in there blackmage...but tone them down a little bit and work on your punches more instead of making it all about a multi....multies dont matter that much when your text battling......

i felt like both of your verses could have been better.....no real personals in either one of them....punchlines...i have to go with blackmage...his just hit a little harder....work on your creativity osiris....your punches have potential to hit hard...but you have to be more creative with them...same for you blackmage...just not as much.....multis go to blackmage....wordplay....none really in either verse....so i have to vote on punches pretty much......blackmage work on that structure...not too good.......so blackmage gets this on better punches......PLEASE return the favor with a vote in my battle vs. Dee Block....please explain your vote also........thank you....

Voted For: Os1ris

i give this vote to os1ris he had betta punches.....mage had betta flow...os1ris had betta structure and vocab i give this vote 2 os1ris

Blackmage sorry no support for ya, you get shitted on dude/
I got ya beat when you come unarmed like roman statues//
8/10 good opener

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Uppin this thing ^()()()()()()(((^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^)(&()*&)*^

not this bullshit again ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^

yo i'm uppin this bitch for votes so r.v get at me

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