Rose
 

I admire you rose,

for no matter good or bad
you strike a pose
which is able to hold
my most feared foes
those which cannot see
that which is trully free
could never imagine that they're a bee
trying to get at your honey
it cost no money
to admire you rose
you trully are one of a kind
I would give you to a girl thats hard to find
on a day when the sun and the moon are aligned
in the master scheme of life i like your design
full bloom in your prime
heavenly scent as if divine,

You care not of my looks or my clothes,
for that i admire you rose.

pretty nice
vocab needs to improve
flow was aight
keep writing