Brand New Beat
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/xspittymusic.htm

called Kinda Game....

you need to elavate at beats a lot.....no offense....just work on your drums and syths...they sounded worse the Stock Cell Phone RIngers on a 2001 phone

Hm... the melody is way off key... the instruments are far too simple and not mastered at all. I can see what you're trying to do but right now it just hurts my ears listening to this. Get some hard hitting drums in there and tone down the weird noises. Keep practicing.

lol, keep trying, you'll get it soon