Tha Sickness vs DeViLsAdVoKiT1
 

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6-10 lines

No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 30

Check in by: 01-26-05 at 08:01 PM

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

Tha Sickness has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-05 11:16 PM.

DeViLsAdVoKiT1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-05 11:26 PM.

Whats this cat thinking, trying ta battle me/
You Couldnt throw out a punch line, if u were Notorious B.I.G./
Kidz foolish sayen he THa Sickness/
You PrOBALLY stab ya own man in tha back, and say its strictly business/
I aint tryin ta hate, im juss tryin ta spit facts/
you a no body, probally the type who be thinkin he be black/
but he looks in the mirror and see's the opposite of that/
I aint no busta, I go out on every limb/
Battelin with confidence, always knowin i can win/

i see ya one nothin record, but it was claimed by default
ima break yo winning streak, bring it right to a hault //
maybe you should learn to hold ya own in tha crew
then King~~Dipset wouldnt have to snip, snip, cut you //
ima rip you apart and gut you, cuz you worship Satan the unholy
ya childish and fictious, like rolie polie olie //
im takin control, i got my finger on tha button, im yurnin
one push and poof, your reduced to nuttin, eternity in fire sufferin //

-rolie polie olie - disney t.v. show character
-king dipset cut him from tha LC crew
-his 1 win was because his opponent didnt post
-eternity in hell sufferin (in hell) cuz of his name

fuck.... sufferin = burning .... typo, my bad ... keep that in mind when you vote!!!!

Voted For: DeViLsAdVoKiT1

eyo do i no u from sum where man but besides that u got my vote flow was good n structure was nice good piece

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Voted For: Tha Sickness

diz was a good lil battle but here's my opinion of it:
opena: tha godfatha
punches: both
personals: tha godfatha
multis: both
structure: tha godfatha
closa: tha godfatha
tha g.f. came a lil harder den devil so da wins goes 2 g.f

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Voted For: DeViLsAdVoKiT1

ba baba better punches, i like that one about big, but he had better vocab deff. but my vote just has to go with you d, i like ur confidence, godfatha ur lines go to long i dont like it

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hahhahhahahahaha ... ALIASSSSSSSS ..... that was a funny one man, tryna cheat and shit on ya own crew member, you tryna get cut? you know thats my job ....

This was feedback posted for Tha Sickness
 

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This was feedback posted for Tha Sickness
 

Whats this cat thinking, trying ta battle me/
You Couldnt throw out a punch line, if u were Notorious B.I.G./
decent punch, played
Kidz foolish sayen he THa Sickness/
You PrOBALLY stab ya own man in tha back, and say its strictly business/
no, punch was weak
I aint tryin ta hate, im juss tryin ta spit facts/
you a no body, probally the type who be thinkin he be black/
but he looks in the mirror and see's the opposite of that/
decent, kinda weak but was aight
I aint no busta, I go out on every limb/
Battelin with confidence, always knowin i can win/
weak closer

overall ur drop was all played, hardly any
punches were hard-hittin and landed, elevate more

i see ya one nothin record, but it was claimed by default
ima break yo winning streak, bring it right to a hault //
decent opener
maybe you should learn to hold ya own in tha crew
then King~~Dipset wouldnt have to snip, snip, cut you //
nice persona, punch landed
ima rip you apart and gut you, cuz you worship Satan the unholy
ya childish and fictious, like rolie polie olie //
weak punch, flow was choppy
im takin control, i got my finger on tha button, im yurnin
one push and poof, your reduced to nuttin, eternity in fire sufferin //
decent closer

overall you had a decent drop, u had a nice persona
and the punches were aight there, but overall u took this
one…elevate more tho

uppin for some votes.. ayyo fuck that vote by mafia, thats D.A's aka ... lets get the votin started again.. honest votes will be returned fo sho son

Voted For: Tha Sickness

Whats this cat thinking, trying ta battle me/
You Couldnt throw out a punch line, if u were Notorious B.I.G./
^ naw, not a strong punch

Kidz foolish sayen he THa Sickness/
You PrOBALLY stab ya own man in tha back, and say its strictly business/
^ Aight idea, he's a herb

I aint tryin ta hate, im juss tryin ta spit facts/
you a no body, probally the type who be thinkin he be black/
^ WTF? Naw, not even really a punch

but he looks in the mirror and see's the opposite of that/
I aint no busta, I go out on every limb/
Battelin with confidence, always knowin i can win/
^ You just blowin yaself up, not punchin him. nothing good here
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i see ya one nothin record, but it was claimed by default
ima break yo winning streak, bring it right to a hault //
^ Aight personal here

maybe you should learn to hold ya own in tha crew
then King~~Dipset wouldnt have to snip, snip, cut you //
^ Lmfao, funny personal crew shit.

ima rip you apart and gut you, cuz you worship Satan the unholy
ya childish and fictious, like rolie polie olie //
^ Not really feelin this punch

im takin control, i got my finger on tha button, im yurnin
one push and poof, your reduced to nuttin, eternity in fire sufferin //
^ Okay


Sickness had one punch, it was kinda weak but it was aight. He just had better flow and was more creative. The other guy munched nuts.