majorly better than my others (better vocab)
 

yo...my rhymes are illmatic
they dramatic there you have it
doesn't matter if i'm from milwaulkee, compton, or california
i just spat da facts out fo' ya
from bein' debated, hated and degrated
i elevated now i made it
it's da fame i'm collectin
i'm tired of all this disrespectin'
so it's my mistakes i'm correctin
i'm gonna be a rapper i'm even investin'
and now ya'll guessin how tha fuck i'ma do it
i'm just spittin' new shit
so you could be hatin', mad, or jealous
but if u know how much better you are then tell us
i still gotta work wit my hooks and structure
but when i get it down they'll puncture
so as i get out the knife to take your life
i'ma slit ur throat'n watch u bleed
unless u give me the feed i need

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